Petah

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  • Petah May 3rd2013
    A Letter to Her

    Petah Jan 16th2018

    3Votes, average: 5 out 5
    Romance | 3 Comments

    Thank you, Mehran!!! I also like reality in fiction.

  • Petah May 2nd2013
    A Letter to Her

    Petah Jan 16th2018

    3Votes, average: 5 out 5
    Romance | 3 Comments

    Hey Guys!!! Please do comment. I look forward to reading your insights and thoughts on the above short story.

  • Petah Apr 23rd2013
    The Mark

    Petah Jan 16th2018

    6Votes, average: 5 out 5
    Romance | 4 Comments

    Dear Priyanka, Thank you for taking the time to critique it and giving me such support. I am interested to know if the twist at the end, although subtle, had worked. Did you suspected that she was pregnant and what did you think, it had happened to Helen

  • Petah Apr 17th2013
    The Mark

    Petah Jan 16th2018

    6Votes, average: 5 out 5
    Romance | 4 Comments

    Hello everyone! This is my first story, I have dared to put on the internet for everyone to read. I would be ecstatic to hear from those who read it all the way through. All comments whether critical or positive are welcomed :) Thx!

  • Petah Apr 6th2013
    Death of a Dreamer

    geedda Nov 30th-0001

    4Votes, average: 5 out 5
    Mystery / Thriller | 6 Comments

    good read. thank you.

Petah