Ruhani

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  • Ruhani Feb 21st
    Prison Break: Part 1: First two years and a distant dream. (Adventure / Action)
    Jagrit
    18 comments
    18th Nov 2011

    gud 1.... waiting for 2nd part

  • Ruhani Jan 30th
    MURALS OF AN UNWRITTEN POEM (Drama)
    Akarsha Kamala
    1 comments
    3rd Oct 2013

    nice one

  • Ruhani Sep 17th
    Food (Tragedy)
    starpurple
    2 comments
    16th Sep 2012

    nicely penned down... :)

  • Ruhani Apr 21st
    The Spider and the Fly (Others)
    geedda
    3 comments
    12th Mar 2012

    I took a lot of time to read this story as it was quite longest among ur other stories.. but again nicely penned down... i enjoy reading ur wrk:)

  • Ruhani Apr 21st
    Wonder If? (Inspirational)
    geedda
    4 comments
    2nd Apr 2012

    of course, the various wanderings in ur above wrk made me smile through out the story.. Hw beautifully u hav drafted dis scrip:)

  • Ruhani Apr 10th
    My Life in the bush of Fear (Adventure / Action)
    11 comments
    9th Apr 2012

    nicely penned down...It was so natural and simple in its way... keep writing:)

  • Ruhani Apr 4th
    Dane's Steer (Inspirational)
    loril
    7 comments
    28th Mar 2012

    According to me, the beginning shouldn't be altered as it is creating an ambiance which is the best way to start with any story, nd u have done it nicely.

  • Ruhani Apr 1st
    The Prince and his magical possessions (Adventure / Action)
    Ruhani
    35 comments
    19th Nov 2011

    hey Sallymohsen, actually any story before publishing goes to the editor of the website for a review and if your story qualify the rules, it will surely get publish.

  • Ruhani Mar 31st
    The Arrange Marriage (Drama)
    eddywalker
    17 comments
    16th Mar 2012

    What i wanted to say above is if this story would have had a positive ending, it would have lost its excitement and effectiveness.

  • Ruhani Mar 31st
    The Arrange Marriage (Drama)
    eddywalker
    17 comments
    16th Mar 2012

    Yup, u r absolutely right that depressing endings are not such a bad thing. And I took ur story in a vry positive way rather than getting depressed. It was an excellent story, thts too of my taste...:)

  • Ruhani Mar 31st
    The Prince and his magical possessions (Adventure / Action)
    Ruhani
    35 comments
    19th Nov 2011

    well thank you for appreciating... I couldnt find your story.. hope to see it soon... good luck:)

  • Ruhani Mar 31st
    Dane's Steer (Inspirational)
    loril
    7 comments
    28th Mar 2012

    Thats indeed an interesting writing and have a very different storyline. No doubt, It made me little emotional too in the end. I would like to appreciate your style and approach of describing the whole event. Great story!!!!

  • Ruhani Mar 31st
    The Arrange Marriage (Drama)
    eddywalker
    17 comments
    16th Mar 2012

    Hey Eddywalker, really appreciate the way u start up ur stories nd then end up so differently.... Amazing piece of work... Though it was little depressing in the end, and could have simply concluded in a positive note; but i must say u made it much more e

  • Ruhani Mar 31st
    The Figure (Romance)
    alolam
    2 comments
    30th Mar 2012

    Wow!!! This is really an awesome romantic story.. It perfectly depicted the heartbroken lover with deep pain and fear of separation lies in his true love.... Good one:)

  • Ruhani Mar 31st
    The Man and the little boy (Horror)
    Ruhani
    10 comments
    26th Mar 2012

    thanx:)

  • Ruhani Mar 31st
    The Man and the little boy (Horror)
    Ruhani
    10 comments
    26th Mar 2012

    thanx George....:)

  • Ruhani Mar 27th
    The Man and the little boy (Horror)
    Ruhani
    10 comments
    26th Mar 2012

    thanx guys... I appreciate ur comments...:)

  • Ruhani Mar 20th
    One White Rose (Others)
    Sherry
    3 comments
    19th Mar 2012

    a nice nd little touchy too as it reminded me of my childhood days whn ma grandma used to make awesum stuff with her sewing. Sumtimes i used to put my nose inside it, the moment she move here nd der for sum other work. Evn I tried my hands on few things..

  • Ruhani Mar 14th
    love@ SBS (Romance)
    Pankaj.Priyadarshi
    20 comments
    14th Mar 2012

    I am just speechless as how to compliment on this story... A wonderful piece of work.. really impressed the way u described each and every moment inside it... a nice love story with a beautiful ending.

  • Ruhani Mar 4th
    Please Don't Murder Me (Drama)
    illustrated18
    4 comments
    2nd Mar 2012

    thts a nice story but little sad too... Especially the ending was little depressive but too gud. In the whole script i felt like jumping inside nd rescue the person... Suspense made me curious all d time as wht next.... Keep writing!!!!

  • Ruhani Mar 4th
    Georgina (Comedy)
    Raymond
    2 comments
    4th Mar 2012

    i absolutely liked it... especially the way u described every moments nd situations. I could easily visualize the whole drama. keep up:)

  • Ruhani Mar 1st
    The Terrible (Bedtime / Fairy tale)
    qlstrange
    2 comments
    27th Feb 2012

    lovely story with a good ending.... It remind me of a movie 'adam', the person having no emotions and his life. No doubt ur story is much better than that too... keep it up:)

  • Ruhani Feb 24th
    Look at Me Now (Others)
    geedda
    4 comments
    24th Feb 2012

    Hey that's an amazing piece of work, a fantastic script... I have lesser words to explain, may be one among the best stories of this website... There is a deep meaning hidden inside the humor... I really got touched by few line which goes-"I went to bed o

  • Ruhani Feb 20th
    The Monarchs (Fiction)
    solbek1
    4 comments
    17th Feb 2012

    Hey dude,nicely penned down though could have been better in the end.I liked it.

  • Ruhani Feb 19th
    The Diary Of Ruth Hill (Others)
    Tammy
    8 comments
    18th Feb 2012

    Ahhh... amazing work.. I felt in between as if i was myself present in the scenes.. perfectly described.. the mystery and suspense made me curious all the time as whats the next gonna happen... Interesting one!!!

  • Ruhani Feb 18th
    Chicken or Egg? (Others)
    Anish
    4 comments
    16th Feb 2012

    nicely penned down

  • Ruhani Feb 16th
    The Petulant Prophet (Others)
    geedda
    6 comments
    14th Feb 2012

    thanx...i got it:)

  • Ruhani Feb 16th
    Sisyphus (Tragedy)
    TheScribbler
    6 comments
    15th Feb 2012

    Hey, your story is amazing... I loved the way u described nd illustrated the situation aroung Sisyohus... it made me contemplate every moment as whats gonna next...though once in between the story i felt that u stretched it little longer... but wonderful

  • Ruhani Feb 15th
    The Petulant Prophet (Others)
    geedda
    6 comments
    14th Feb 2012

    Hey George, dis is a different story. I admire ur wrk.. I was little confused in between the story though it seemed to be interesting. Can u please summarize it in 2 -3 lines. Thanks

  • Ruhani Feb 9th
    Little Do We Know (Others)
    fencingtypists
    3 comments
    9th Feb 2012

    wow!!! very adorable and charming story.... It was very constant all the way through and very thorough for a short story.... Thanx for writing:)

  • Ruhani Feb 8th
    The Moment That Never Happend (Romance)
    nightofminutes
    4 comments
    7th Feb 2012

    I felt as if I was watching the incident myself only..as it was so nicely described as could easily visualize... though the tragedy made me feel sad... but good wrk dear...

  • Ruhani Feb 5th
    Edward and the Imp (Comedy)
    Sherry
    6 comments
    4th Feb 2012

    Excellent way to create an environment of suspense and describe the situation and surroundings around the character... a good story

  • Ruhani Feb 4th
    The Night Disco Died (Others)
    geedda
    6 comments
    3rd Feb 2012

    Good story. Thanks I got a big smile while reading it... simply liked the way u ended up..

  • Ruhani Feb 3rd
    Bad Rubbish (Children / Kids)
    Raymond
    5 comments
    2nd Feb 2012

    haehehe....good 1... liked it,just the kind of stuff m interested in- humor.. keep comeing..

  • Ruhani Feb 2nd
    The Christmas Sweater (Tragedy)
    Patrick
    5 comments
    1st Feb 2012

    ahhhh.... u scared me... good work..:)

  • Ruhani Feb 2nd
    A Winter's Tale (Others)
    Sherry
    7 comments
    30th Jan 2012

    a sweet story... i like the way the story got its end...

  • Ruhani Jan 27th
    Notice Things, They Change You (Others)
    weseektheomissions
    7 comments
    27th Jan 2012

    Nice story...

  • Ruhani Jan 25th
    The witch and the devil (Bedtime / Fairy tale)
    Gabriela
    8 comments
    24th Jan 2012

    Good Story...:)

  • Ruhani Jan 23rd
    Bad Temper or Nail the Fence (Inspirational)
    dilipnahak
    7 comments
    22nd Jan 2012

    its a nice moral lesson as how we can control our anger that is the biggest enemy of a man. nice story Dilip..:)

  • Ruhani Jan 21st
    Into Darkness (Fiction)
    Sherry
    7 comments
    21st Jan 2012

    I really appreciate the way you described the character and the surroundings... liked it completely and could easily picturize it...

  • Ruhani Jan 20th
    Women Through The Centuries (Adventure / Action)
    babettesmuse
    7 comments
    17th Jan 2012

    nice story

  • Ruhani Jan 20th
    The second paragraph (Romance)
    barun
    11 comments
    19th Jan 2012

    Ahhhh.... an awesome story... i won't mind saying that one of the best stories i really liked... beautifullll... and especially the end part of it.. Also the title is too good and appropriate...:)... love to read your stories...keep writing!!!

  • Ruhani Jan 18th
    A time to say goodbye (Fiction)
    barun
    6 comments
    10th Jan 2012

    hey Barun, again a good story... keep it up

  • Ruhani Jan 18th
    Midnight Rose (Drama)
    aubreegrace
    27 comments
    1st Jan 2012

    you are welcome Aubreegrace.... ll wait for your next story ans surely gv my viewpoints... Evn m going to write a story soon... lets see hw its come...

  • Ruhani Jan 18th
    The Prince and his magical possessions (Adventure / Action)
    Ruhani
    35 comments
    19th Nov 2011

    thanx Aubreegrace....

  • Ruhani Jan 17th
    Midnight Rose (Drama)
    aubreegrace
    27 comments
    1st Jan 2012

    amazing story. have penned down vry nicely and differently... every moment and situation was framed so perfectly that i felt like m watching some movie... gud wrk...

  • Ruhani Dec 24th
    Father and son (Fiction)
    barun
    12 comments
    23rd Dec 2011

    beautiful story Barun... very impressive ... I really liked the way u wind up ur story...touching:)

  • Ruhani Dec 22nd
    joint session 2 (Fiction)
    eddywalker
    7 comments
    20th Dec 2011

    Wonderfully written, like all of your stories....keep it up

  • Ruhani Dec 22nd
    the way to hell (Horror)
    eddywalker
    10 comments
    22nd Dec 2011

    AWwwwwww!!!! what a story....u are an amazing writer...keep up the good work...

  • Ruhani Dec 19th
    Echo Lake (Mystery / Thriller)
    jgrover15
    5 comments
    15th Dec 2011

    amazing story... really scary and too emotional... :)

  • Ruhani Dec 19th
    Ghosts don't exist (Horror)
    eddywalker
    7 comments
    19th Dec 2011

    Again nice story... but ended up very soon... wanted to read more to have more fun.... :)

  • Ruhani Dec 18th
    In Another Life (Tragedy)
    irishgirl
    14 comments
    16th Dec 2011

    superlikeee!!!

  • Ruhani Dec 18th
    In Another Life (Tragedy)
    irishgirl
    14 comments
    16th Dec 2011

    Superlikeee!!!!

  • Ruhani Dec 18th
    In Another Life (Tragedy)
    irishgirl
    14 comments
    16th Dec 2011

    Nice story dear.... simply loved the way u tried to put up the emotions and the feelings. It luked so natural... and vry delicately u hav given a soft twist to the story from happiness to tragedy..... keep it up.... All the best for further stories

  • Ruhani Dec 18th
    The night that was! (Tragedy)
    aseemrastogi2
    10 comments
    17th Dec 2011

    Nice story Aseem... In the beginning it reminded me of bombay blasts in train many years bck... liked the supense maintained in entire story. Also when story took a twist that now Retesh will be released from jail, gave mea moment of relief but than end u

  • Ruhani Dec 18th
    the attic (Tragedy)
    eddywalker
    7 comments
    18th Dec 2011

    beautiful story with hidden deep meaning... :).. It was easy to conceptualize it as described very simply... :)

  • Ruhani Dec 18th
    The Chronology of a Broken Trust (Others)
    sonalpandey
    24 comments
    14th Dec 2011

    Interesting story Sonal. it has been nicely penned down … really appreciate the way you have maintain its rhythm and its simplicity… keep it up…:)

  • Ruhani Dec 12th
    The Ashes Of GETORA (Mystery / Thriller)
    Divyansh
    14 comments
    8th Dec 2011

    Reading ur story, i felt like i am watching some movie, could picturize the whole story, so natural and so simply written and elaborated... Perfect combination of short, simple and scary... Keep it up Divyansh... would love to read some more....

  • Ruhani Nov 27th
    Living with Lake (Fiction)
    Jaspreet
    17 comments
    26th Nov 2011

    Superlikeee!!!!! what a story jaspreet.. Impressed!!!... whole story is beautifully pennned down. i could felt myself inside all the scenes and the moments. The lake, forest , house evrything I pictured so perfectly... ultimate story....!!!!!!

  • Ruhani Nov 25th
    The Trail of Smoke... (Others)
    Kunal
    14 comments
    24th Nov 2011

    Superlikeee!!!!! for me too jass...

  • Ruhani Nov 25th
    The Prince and his magical possessions (Adventure / Action)
    Ruhani
    35 comments
    19th Nov 2011

    hey thanx dear... :)

  • Ruhani Nov 25th
    The Prince and his magical possessions (Adventure / Action)
    Ruhani
    35 comments
    19th Nov 2011

    Thanx Robby...:)when is ur next story coming???

  • Ruhani Nov 25th
    The Prince and his magical possessions (Adventure / Action)
    Ruhani
    35 comments
    19th Nov 2011

    thanx Anikhet.. I am waiting for your story too...:)

  • Ruhani Nov 25th
    The Art of Disposal (Mystery / Thriller)
    arabella808
    6 comments
    25th Nov 2011

    Hey Arebbela, i really liked the way u maintained the suspense throughout the story. the way each nd every moment has been described is phinominal. !!!

  • Ruhani Nov 24th
    The Trail of Smoke... (Others)
    Kunal
    14 comments
    24th Nov 2011

    Again a good Story Sir... :)

  • Ruhani Nov 23rd
    Black Day! (Inspirational)
    Priyanka
    10 comments
    24th Jan 2018

    WOW!!! a wonderful story...simply liked the way you have described the characters and the situation around. The suspense and the horror made me eager and keen the whole moment as whats gonna happen next.Ended up with a affirmative note. in short, I enjoye

  • Ruhani Nov 22nd
    God: The Ultimate POWER… (Others)
    Jaspreet
    24 comments
    22nd Nov 2011

    Very nice story Jass... u have penned down in very simple words....The end of story surprised me with a twist of suspense. It reminded me of a true incident happened in my relations. Good Show Jasss....:)

  • Ruhani Nov 22nd
    The Prince and his magical possessions (Adventure / Action)
    Ruhani
    35 comments
    19th Nov 2011

    thanx dear:)

  • Ruhani Nov 22nd
    Prison Break: Part 1: First two years and a distant dream. (Adventure / Action)
    Jagrit
    18 comments
    18th Nov 2011

    hmmmm.... i agree... :)))))..Luv u jassss:)

  • Ruhani Nov 22nd
    Prison Break: Part 1: First two years and a distant dream. (Adventure / Action)
    Jagrit
    18 comments
    18th Nov 2011

    heheheheh..... Jass I knew it that Jagrit will surely write you that please dont compare my international level story with Ekta kapoors serial...hehehe.... he just hate her and her supers!!!! haaaahaaaa... I cant control laughing....:)))))))))))))

  • Ruhani Nov 22nd
    The Prince and his magical possessions (Adventure / Action)
    Ruhani
    35 comments
    19th Nov 2011

    Thanx Jai...I wish u get it...I Knw ultimately what would you like to get>>>>Golden hair Princess....lol...heheheh

  • Ruhani Nov 22nd
    Priceless Pearls...Few pages from my diary... (Romance)
    Kunal
    14 comments
    21st Nov 2011

    Is it from Your novel 'Love was never mine' ???

  • Ruhani Nov 22nd
    Priceless Pearls...Few pages from my diary... (Romance)
    Kunal
    14 comments
    21st Nov 2011

    Lovely story Kunal Sir... made me little emotional at the end... :)

  • Ruhani Nov 22nd
    The Prince and his magical possessions (Adventure / Action)
    Ruhani
    35 comments
    19th Nov 2011

    thanx Dhawal… i ll write some more such stories to keep u in touch with your Sweet Purani yaadein….:)

  • Ruhani Nov 21st
    The Prince and his magical possessions (Adventure / Action)
    Ruhani
    35 comments
    19th Nov 2011

    hey thanx Geeta:)

  • Ruhani Nov 21st
    The Prince and his magical possessions (Adventure / Action)
    Ruhani
    35 comments
    19th Nov 2011

    thanx Soniya

  • Ruhani Nov 21st
    The Prince and his magical possessions (Adventure / Action)
    Ruhani
    35 comments
    19th Nov 2011

    thanks jaspreet for appriciation and valuable suggestion...ll do it surely:)

  • Ruhani Nov 21st
    Firensheep Day (Inspirational)
    Kunal
    13 comments
    20th Nov 2011

    what a story Kunal Sir... simple and impressive....:)

  • Ruhani Nov 20th
    The Prince and his magical possessions (Adventure / Action)
    Ruhani
    35 comments
    19th Nov 2011

    thanx guys..:)

Ruhani

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