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  • barun Mar 1st
    The second paragraph (Romance)
    barun
    11 comments
    19th Jan 2012

    Thank you

  • barun Feb 17th
    Chicken or Egg? (Others)
    Anish
    4 comments
    16th Feb 2012

    awesome one. brilliant reasoning !!! keep it up sir

  • barun Jan 28th
    Bad Temper or Nail the Fence (Inspirational)
    dilipnahak
    7 comments
    22nd Jan 2012

    i like the moral of the story

  • barun Jan 17th
    A time to say goodbye (Fiction)
    barun
    6 comments
    10th Jan 2012

    thank you so much

  • barun Jan 12th
    Midnight Rose (Drama)
    aubreegrace
    27 comments
    1st Jan 2012

    Sure thing Aubree. Happy writing.

  • barun Jan 11th
    Midnight Rose (Drama)
    aubreegrace
    27 comments
    1st Jan 2012

    For Barnett: The first few paragraphs are in present tense. Then it suddenly switches past tense. Then onwards, there's a mix of past and present. There's no harm in healthy criticism. Right?

  • barun Jan 9th
    Midnight Rose (Drama)
    aubreegrace
    27 comments
    1st Jan 2012

    The sentence structure seems to swing haphazardly between present tense and past tense. Not that I'm a perfect writer myself, but there should have been a stable sentence structure. Good effort none the less.

  • barun Dec 25th
    the way to hell (Horror)
    eddywalker
    10 comments
    22nd Dec 2011

    A lot of lines in the early paragraphs started with "He"s. But the last paragrapgh was awesome

  • barun Dec 25th
    The Container of Souls (Horror)
    scottmar
    15 comments
    21st Dec 2011

    awesome. reminded me one of the stories from edgar allan poe

  • barun Dec 25th
    CEDAR GROVE (Others)
    eldawson
    6 comments
    19th Dec 2011

    the way all the minute details have been explained is shrewd. good writing

  • barun Dec 24th
    Father and son (Fiction)
    barun
    12 comments
    23rd Dec 2011

    thank u all. each and every word of ur appreciation is dear 2 me.

  • barun Dec 24th
    Father and son (Fiction)
    barun
    12 comments
    23rd Dec 2011

    actually i don't hav a son in real life. i'm just 26. thanks 4 da appreciation.

barun

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