It's a well written story. Nice work. Keep writing.
yes you are right. this story needs this ending.
thanks ruhani. i used to think that depressive endings are not such a bad thing but i realise that people read to be entertained and it's not a good idea to leave them depressed. i will try to make better endings from now on that leave the readers with ho
i'll take that as a complement
thank you nitika and priyanka
thank you priyanka and amit
they say that endings should not be sad. that even sad stories should have a happy ending. or at least a ray of hope at the end that makes the reader feel that everything gets better in the future. but while writing this story i didn't want to do that. i
it's a tragedy.
yes it was intentional as even the title of the story reveals his death. i was trying to get the reader to think that maybe rusty dies because of what the kids do to him. there has been a study on child soldiers which says that children are capable of doi
this one was just an experiment with symbolism but i'm glad you people like it. thanks
there are a lot of "he"s in the last paragraph as well. i just didn't wanna name 'him' coz he could be anybody (maybe the reader) and the only concrete character in the story is the devil in the form of the wolf. i like the paragraph when he smokes the la
very interesting read. it's not much of a story in itself and seems to be a part of a bigger story like a lot of my stories. i guess that's why i like it! but seriously well written especially if you don't have a son in real life. good questions asked. qu
thank you. my stories sometimes seem incomplete as if they were a part of a bigger story but that's coz i write most of them in one sitting. but i'm glad that some people like them
this story actually is based on a personal experience. it's just two guys getting high and talking rubbish. there's not much to it except an attempt at describing how it feels to get high. i have written another story called joint session 2 which hopefull
there are hints in the story that edwards is schizophrenic and george is his imaginary friend. that and a lot of symbolism.
wonderfully written. emotions expressed very nicely. characters were very real as well. the most important part of any tragedy is the little bits of happiness here and there that later make the pain real and those little bits were very nicely written like