jls685

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  • jls685 Jun 28th
    Prologue of my novel (Romance)
    ninadsapre
    2 comments
    18th Jun 2012

    I'm sorry that I have to leave a negative reply but I don't think you should be writing in English (if it is indeed your second language, which it seems to be) if you do not yet understand that "I" has to be capitalized and how to use past, present, and f

  • jls685 Apr 16th
    Tom Grilligan (Fiction)
    jls685
    4 comments
    11th Apr 2012

    Please comment and vote all criticism will be greatly appreciated. -Josiah Sellstrom

  • jls685 Apr 12th
    Sisyphus (Tragedy)
    TheScribbler
    6 comments
    15th Feb 2012

    A great story, sorry but I cannot offer very much constructive criticism seeing as you are a much better writer than I am. So I'll just write compliments. I liked the way you described the scenery, the amount of excruciating detail you put into describing

  • jls685 Apr 12th
    Dane's Steer (Inspirational)
    loril
    7 comments
    28th Mar 2012

    Hey great story Mrs. Leavitt, it actually made me tear up a little bit this time. I think you have whittled it down to the point where it is just right. If it can emotionally effect me then it must be something powerful indeed aye?

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