Comedy

A Time to Remember or Forget

A small-town girl moves to the big city to start a new life but acquires a roommate. with a low IQ and void of common sense. It becomes a nightmare.

Apr 20, 2023 | 6 min read

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John Allison

Jul 7, 2023

Well, your characters certainly can't be ignored! I could feel your pain. You might ask a friend to read it and evaluate the punctuation. Overall, a nice start in your writing career.

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