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ABANDONED HOUSE OF HORROR
Oct 30th, 2023 at 9:37 AM
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On a clear summer starry night near a small town in Hamden Ohio stood a big abandoned house. The house was boarded up, the home seem creepy from the outside when i looked up at it. I'm wondering if i should go in there to take a peak. But i decided to walk on by the creepy old house. Every day when i pass that house, i get so tempted to go in there. I tell myself not to do it, and i shouldn't break the law.
Several weeks later that house was still there, and one day as i was walking on by, i noticed a for sale sign on the front lawn that had a phone number, so i walked up to the sign and typed the numbers into my phone. Then i pressed the call button to see if someone answered. A lady responds. So i proceeded to ask her some questions about the house. She told me the house is very old and it was a quick sale. She told me the price for the home is fifty thousand dollars, which was well within my budget. I was told that the house had no buyers for years.
The following day i get a phone call from that lady, which i was asked if i was interested in still buying the home. I told her yes and she gave me a specific time to meet her at the property the next day in the afternoon. So i'm very anxious to see what the inside looks like tomorrow. The next day at the time i walked to that house which was down the street from me. There was a car sitting in the driveway which i assumed that it was the lady i talked to over the phone the other day. Sure enough it was that lady which she introduced herself as Lully. I also introduced myself as Jake.
Lully walks up to the front door of the house which i'm right behind her. She puts the house key in and turns it and turns the door knob to open the door. We then entered the home, and i couldn't believe what i was seeing with my own vision. It was very nice of what i can see. The place was well furnished and kept neatly. Everything was covered with white sheets which was dusty. A lot of the stuff that i have seen was old and antique like. So Lully shows me the rest of the house and telling me about the history of the property.
Lully asked me "do you like what you have seen so far, what do you think of the home Jake"? I'm very much interested in this property, said Jake. So we decided to exit the house when the door wouldn't open. Lully tries to get the door to open, but the door seemed to be jammed. So i decided to try and get the door to unjammed with no success. Every time we try to get the door to open, it wouldn't budge at all. So now Lully and i are stuck here and very confused on what we should do to get out of this house.
They went into the kitchen to think of something on how to exit the home, so they start up a conversation about themselves and what ever comes to mind. As they were chatting, there was this frantic cry that came out of no where. They paused just to listen what that was. The cry got even louder and louder and then it stopped. They both look at each other and was like, "what the hell is that and where is it coming from"? They walked out of the kitchen and decided to split up to find the source of that cry. Jake went another direction, and Lully went another.
Lully walks passed the basement door, there was this creepy laugh that she heard coming from the basement. So she opens the door to the basement to go down there, the laugh turned into a scary ghostly giggling. In the mean time Jake walks upstairs to the second floor of the house when he walks by a door that leads to the attic when he hears a loud slam with frantic screaming coming from down stairs. He starts running down the stairs when he trips over something and falls down the steps. Jake looks up and sees a scary looking doll sitting on one of the steps. He shakes his head and lifts himself up and runs to the basement door where the sound came from.
He opens the door and starts to go down when the screaming starts to get further away. He follows the screaming when all of sudden there was no more screams. There was much confusing coming to mind when he seen something in the corner of his eye of what looked like a shadow figure on a wall that was near where he stood. He starts yelling on top of his lungs by calling her name, "Lully, Lully, where are you at"? Then he hears a faint words that seem to say "Help me". I'm so scared right now, i can't even think down here. It's so dark, my vision is limited right now. As he's trying to find Lully, something was growling behind him, so he slowly turns and BOOM, he fell to the ground with Lully hovering over him.
Jake gets up and runs for dear life from her. Something happened while she was down here, but what made her evil. Her clothes were torn, and her eyes were gray with red pupils. She was actually levitating off the floor and growling like she's an animal looking for her prey. So i'm running as fast as i can through out the house when she caught up with me and tried to grab me with her evil looking hands. I then managed to escape her. I then reached a room that i can get in and hide. I picked the closet that shuts and i walked into the closet and shut the door a crack. She entered while saying my name in a evil devilish voice. So i keep quiet and still. Lully passes the closet and stops right in front of the door. The door flies of the hinges with the force of her hands.
I then bolted out of the room in fear. I keep running until i hit this male figure who had a hatchet in his hand. He raised the blade which i knew he was going to kill me with it when i bolted around him to another area of the house. I reach the attic in which i opened the door and ran up the attic to find a dark place to hide so i won't be found. Than i heard a frantic cry coming from an area in the attic where i was hiding. I then seen a small female figure that looks like a little girl in a far distance from me. She had that grin of a smile on her face that was creepy. The little girl was walking funny toward me very slowly and then i seen what she was holding. She had a surgical knife along with the head of someone. I got out of where i was hiding and ran down the stairs to the attic door to exit.
I than bumped into Lully, her eyes were no longer evil and she felt so weak, she collapsed to the floor. I picked her up and carried her down the stairs to the first floor of the home. I laid her down on the covered couch so i can find something to break the window. I go and start searching through the kitchen to find what is useful to shatter the window. Then i went into the garage area and found a sledge hammer to use. But than i noticed the door to the garage was open. I go back to the living room to get Lully, which she was not on the couch where i put her. "Where did she go now"? So i started thinking should i leave her here and escape this horrible place without her or should i stay and try to find her within this house. I decided to leave without her. I went to the garage where the door to the garage is and it was still opened. I walked out and started walking down the street and i never looked backed.
I reached my apartment and i unlocked my door to my apartment and entered which i put my house keys on the table and flopped down on my bed because i was so exhausted from this entire day being in a creepy scary house. Thank god that is over. So i pull the cover over me to relax and which i fell asleep not long after i got in. The following morning i got up and went to the bathroom to freshen up. Then i went to the kitchen and made a pot of coffee for myself and pour me some cereal for breakfast. As i was drinking my cup of coffee and finishing up my breakfast i get a knock at the door. I looked through the peep hole and i could see two well dressed gentleman that had a holster and a badge. So i opened the door to see what they wanted, and let them in.
"How can i help you two men"? Jake asked. This is detective Cole and detective Frankie, they said. We are wondering if you seen this woman which they pulled out a photo from their booklet to show me. I told them the last time i seen her was at that abandoned house down the street. I told them i was there to meet her so she can show me the home, which she told me she was a real estate agent from chardon. But they told me there was no person by that name that ever worked there. I was told she was a runaway from lake county who broken into abandon homes and telling people she's an realitor for chardon ohio. I didn't even know that and i felt she lied to me from the first get go when i met her. So they advised me to let them know if i ever see her again. They got in their car and drove off.
Jake gets his clothes on and heads out to go to that house down the street, which by the time he got there the house was fully engulfed in flames. What started the fire was not what he thought it to be. I sirens roaring away in the distance. I'm just standing there scratching my head in disbelieve. The fire trucks came and they got out and hooked up their hoses to the hydrants. They dragged the hoses and turns it on to hose the house down with streams of water. It took them entire day to extinguish the blaze. So after that they started to investigate and look through the ruble of debris to figure out what started the fire. As they were doing that, one of the firemen found some burned bodies. One of them seems to be that lady Lully. The others couldn't be identified because their bodies were so badly burned from the blaze. Jake decides to walk back to his apartment to recap of what just happened.
While i'm sitting on the couch, i got the realization that she died that night when i left her there. How messed up is that. I'm so cold hearted that i didn't even care about myself nor her. What kind of person am i. So i turn on the tv to watch something to get my mind off that subject. Then i seen a live broadcast of a person that was wanted for the murder of three people and maybe a fourth. Come to find out the photo that was shown was me. "How can that be, yeah right, that isn't me". So the next morning i get a hard knock at the door. It was those two detectives that i seen yesterday morning. They wanted me to come to the police station with them. I got my things and got into their vehicle. Within thirty minutes we arrived at the station and they opened the back door to let me out. I followed them in and they took me to a room, which they gave me a chair to sit in. What they did to me next was hard to imagine.
They started asking questions about that day when i was with her. But i told them i don't know what your all talking about. They slammed their hands on the table which i jumped in fear. You know you killed those other people and that lady in that house,the detectives said. Why would i do such a thing like that. What they made me do next was to confess to something i didn't even do. So i confessed and wrote it down for them of the paper they gave me on the table. So one of them got up and told me to stand up and put my hands behind my back, which i complied. The handcuffs went on and i was lead to a empty cell near by. I was now charged for four homicides i didn't commit.
I'm in the cell really thinking about how did i get into this mess in the first place when i finally realized i've should of never called that number and went inside that scary looking house at all. I should have kept on walking by and never have a thought of wanting that property. Now i'm going to be behind bars for the rest of my entire life. Jake is wondering away how he can get himself out of the situation that he's in, when he was lead to a patty wagon outside to be taken to another jail to await trial. The days got longer as i'm looking at the cell walls and being so bored with nothing to do.
Well as the weeks go by and the months go by, i finally get to go to my court hearing. I was arranged on the charges and the bond, well there was no bond for me, so now i have to wait for the pretrial date. I was escorted back to my cell where i lay there on the bed with being very bored, crying myself to sleep. Several days later i had a pretrial date, which i went to. That was the confusing part and i didn't understand it at all. So then i was lead back to my jail cell awaiting my fate a few weeks later, which i hope i can get freed. By the time that day came i was sentenced to death. I was so upset and balling my eyes out, they had to carry me back to the cell. They actually threw me in my cell and i hit my foot on the concrete bed. Jake was yelling and screaming so loud he was making it worse for himself which the other inmates told him to shut the hell up man, you big cry baby.
Months and years go by, he's starting to go crazy in there, so he tries anything to get out, which he fails every time. One night when the lights go out, he hits his head on the brick wall so hard, he knocks himself out. The following day, he was found unconscious by the staff. He was rushed to the local hospital where he was pronounced dead upon arrival. So did he really pass away or was it just a dream he had that was messed up. On the morning after he woke up and found himself in his own bed in the apartment. "What screwed up dream that was". I gets dressed and finds himself walking down the street and sees the abandoned home still there. It was just a dream that turned very ugly and wrong. I need better positive dreams for now on.
THE END
ABANDONED HOUSE OF HORROR
Oct 30th, 2023 at 9:37 AM
5
api image
Photo: Bruno Guerrero
On a clear summer starry night near a small town in Hamden Ohio stood a big abandoned house. The house was boarded up, the home seem creepy from the outside when i looked up at it. I'm wondering if i should go in there to take a peak. But i decided to walk on by the creepy old house. Every day when i pass that house, i get so tempted to go in there. I tell myself not to do it, and i shouldn't break the law.
Several weeks later that house was still there, and one day as i was walking on by, i noticed a for sale sign on the front lawn that had a phone number, so i walked up to the sign and typed the numbers into my phone. Then i pressed the call button to see if someone answered. A lady responds. So i proceeded to ask her some questions about the house. She told me the house is very old and it was a quick sale. She told me the price for the home is fifty thousand dollars, which was well within my budget. I was told that the house had no buyers for years.
The following day i get a phone call from that lady, which i was asked if i was interested in still buying the home. I told her yes and she gave me a specific time to meet her at the property the next day in the afternoon. So i'm very anxious to see what the inside looks like tomorrow. The next day at the time i walked to that house which was down the street from me. There was a car sitting in the driveway which i assumed that it was the lady i talked to over the phone the other day. Sure enough it was that lady which she introduced herself as Lully. I also introduced myself as Jake.
Lully walks up to the front door of the house which i'm right behind her. She puts the house key in and turns it and turns the door knob to open the door. We then entered the home, and i couldn't believe what i was seeing with my own vision. It was very nice of what i can see. The place was well furnished and kept neatly. Everything was covered with white sheets which was dusty. A lot of the stuff that i have seen was old and antique like. So Lully shows me the rest of the house and telling me about the history of the property.
Lully asked me "do you like what you have seen so far, what do you think of the home Jake"? I'm very much interested in this property, said Jake. So we decided to exit the house when the door wouldn't open. Lully tries to get the door to open, but the door seemed to be jammed. So i decided to try and get the door to unjammed with no success. Every time we try to get the door to open, it wouldn't budge at all. So now Lully and i are stuck here and very confused on what we should do to get out of this house.
They went into the kitchen to think of something on how to exit the home, so they start up a conversation about themselves and what ever comes to mind. As they were chatting, there was this frantic cry that came out of no where. They paused just to listen what that was. The cry got even louder and louder and then it stopped. They both look at each other and was like, "what the hell is that and where is it coming from"? They walked out of the kitchen and decided to split up to find the source of that cry. Jake went another direction, and Lully went another.
Lully walks passed the basement door, there was this creepy laugh that she heard coming from the basement. So she opens the door to the basement to go down there, the laugh turned into a scary ghostly giggling. In the mean time Jake walks upstairs to the second floor of the house when he walks by a door that leads to the attic when he hears a loud slam with frantic screaming coming from down stairs. He starts running down the stairs when he trips over something and falls down the steps. Jake looks up and sees a scary looking doll sitting on one of the steps. He shakes his head and lifts himself up and runs to the basement door where the sound came from.
He opens the door and starts to go down when the screaming starts to get further away. He follows the screaming when all of sudden there was no more screams. There was much confusing coming to mind when he seen something in the corner of his eye of what looked like a shadow figure on a wall that was near where he stood. He starts yelling on top of his lungs by calling her name, "Lully, Lully, where are you at"? Then he hears a faint words that seem to say "Help me". I'm so scared right now, i can't even think down here. It's so dark, my vision is limited right now. As he's trying to find Lully, something was growling behind him, so he slowly turns and BOOM, he fell to the ground with Lully hovering over him.
Jake gets up and runs for dear life from her. Something happened while she was down here, but what made her evil. Her clothes were torn, and her eyes were gray with red pupils. She was actually levitating off the floor and growling like she's an animal looking for her prey. So i'm running as fast as i can through out the house when she caught up with me and tried to grab me with her evil looking hands. I then managed to escape her. I then reached a room that i can get in and hide. I picked the closet that shuts and i walked into the closet and shut the door a crack. She entered while saying my name in a evil devilish voice. So i keep quiet and still. Lully passes the closet and stops right in front of the door. The door flies of the hinges with the force of her hands.
I then bolted out of the room in fear. I keep running until i hit this male figure who had a hatchet in his hand. He raised the blade which i knew he was going to kill me with it when i bolted around him to another area of the house. I reach the attic in which i opened the door and ran up the attic to find a dark place to hide so i won't be found. Than i heard a frantic cry coming from an area in the attic where i was hiding. I then seen a small female figure that looks like a little girl in a far distance from me. She had that grin of a smile on her face that was creepy. The little girl was walking funny toward me very slowly and then i seen what she was holding. She had a surgical knife along with the head of someone. I got out of where i was hiding and ran down the stairs to the attic door to exit.
I than bumped into Lully, her eyes were no longer evil and she felt so weak, she collapsed to the floor. I picked her up and carried her down the stairs to the first floor of the home. I laid her down on the covered couch so i can find something to break the window. I go and start searching through the kitchen to find what is useful to shatter the window. Then i went into the garage area and found a sledge hammer to use. But than i noticed the door to the garage was open. I go back to the living room to get Lully, which she was not on the couch where i put her. "Where did she go now"? So i started thinking should i leave her here and escape this horrible place without her or should i stay and try to find her within this house. I decided to leave without her. I went to the garage where the door to the garage is and it was still opened. I walked out and started walking down the street and i never looked backed.
I reached my apartment and i unlocked my door to my apartment and entered which i put my house keys on the table and flopped down on my bed because i was so exhausted from this entire day being in a creepy scary house. Thank god that is over. So i pull the cover over me to relax and which i fell asleep not long after i got in. The following morning i got up and went to the bathroom to freshen up. Then i went to the kitchen and made a pot of coffee for myself and pour me some cereal for breakfast. As i was drinking my cup of coffee and finishing up my breakfast i get a knock at the door. I looked through the peep hole and i could see two well dressed gentleman that had a holster and a badge. So i opened the door to see what they wanted, and let them in.
"How can i help you two men"? Jake asked. This is detective Cole and detective Frankie, they said. We are wondering if you seen this woman which they pulled out a photo from their booklet to show me. I told them the last time i seen her was at that abandoned house down the street. I told them i was there to meet her so she can show me the home, which she told me she was a real estate agent from chardon. But they told me there was no person by that name that ever worked there. I was told she was a runaway from lake county who broken into abandon homes and telling people she's an realitor for chardon ohio. I didn't even know that and i felt she lied to me from the first get go when i met her. So they advised me to let them know if i ever see her again. They got in their car and drove off.
Jake gets his clothes on and heads out to go to that house down the street, which by the time he got there the house was fully engulfed in flames. What started the fire was not what he thought it to be. I sirens roaring away in the distance. I'm just standing there scratching my head in disbelieve. The fire trucks came and they got out and hooked up their hoses to the hydrants. They dragged the hoses and turns it on to hose the house down with streams of water. It took them entire day to extinguish the blaze. So after that they started to investigate and look through the ruble of debris to figure out what started the fire. As they were doing that, one of the firemen found some burned bodies. One of them seems to be that lady Lully. The others couldn't be identified because their bodies were so badly burned from the blaze. Jake decides to walk back to his apartment to recap of what just happened.
While i'm sitting on the couch, i got the realization that she died that night when i left her there. How messed up is that. I'm so cold hearted that i didn't even care about myself nor her. What kind of person am i. So i turn on the tv to watch something to get my mind off that subject. Then i seen a live broadcast of a person that was wanted for the murder of three people and maybe a fourth. Come to find out the photo that was shown was me. "How can that be, yeah right, that isn't me". So the next morning i get a hard knock at the door. It was those two detectives that i seen yesterday morning. They wanted me to come to the police station with them. I got my things and got into their vehicle. Within thirty minutes we arrived at the station and they opened the back door to let me out. I followed them in and they took me to a room, which they gave me a chair to sit in. What they did to me next was hard to imagine.
They started asking questions about that day when i was with her. But i told them i don't know what your all talking about. They slammed their hands on the table which i jumped in fear. You know you killed those other people and that lady in that house,the detectives said. Why would i do such a thing like that. What they made me do next was to confess to something i didn't even do. So i confessed and wrote it down for them of the paper they gave me on the table. So one of them got up and told me to stand up and put my hands behind my back, which i complied. The handcuffs went on and i was lead to a empty cell near by. I was now charged for four homicides i didn't commit.
I'm in the cell really thinking about how did i get into this mess in the first place when i finally realized i've should of never called that number and went inside that scary looking house at all. I should have kept on walking by and never have a thought of wanting that property. Now i'm going to be behind bars for the rest of my entire life. Jake is wondering away how he can get himself out of the situation that he's in, when he was lead to a patty wagon outside to be taken to another jail to await trial. The days got longer as i'm looking at the cell walls and being so bored with nothing to do.
Well as the weeks go by and the months go by, i finally get to go to my court hearing. I was arranged on the charges and the bond, well there was no bond for me, so now i have to wait for the pretrial date. I was escorted back to my cell where i lay there on the bed with being very bored, crying myself to sleep. Several days later i had a pretrial date, which i went to. That was the confusing part and i didn't understand it at all. So then i was lead back to my jail cell awaiting my fate a few weeks later, which i hope i can get freed. By the time that day came i was sentenced to death. I was so upset and balling my eyes out, they had to carry me back to the cell. They actually threw me in my cell and i hit my foot on the concrete bed. Jake was yelling and screaming so loud he was making it worse for himself which the other inmates told him to shut the hell up man, you big cry baby.
Months and years go by, he's starting to go crazy in there, so he tries anything to get out, which he fails every time. One night when the lights go out, he hits his head on the brick wall so hard, he knocks himself out. The following day, he was found unconscious by the staff. He was rushed to the local hospital where he was pronounced dead upon arrival. So did he really pass away or was it just a dream he had that was messed up. On the morning after he woke up and found himself in his own bed in the apartment. "What screwed up dream that was". I gets dressed and finds himself walking down the street and sees the abandoned home still there. It was just a dream that turned very ugly and wrong. I need better positive dreams for now on.
THE END
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