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Alden The Future of Eldoria

In the village of Ravenwood, young Alden discovers hidden powers bestowed by a legendary hero. With his loyal dog, Murphy, he embarks on a journey to save Eldoria from the evil dragon king, Drakonis Maledictus. A tale of courage, friendship, and destiny awaits.

Feb 16, 2025  |   4 min read

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Alden The Future of Eldoria
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In the small village of Ravenwood, there lived a 16-year-old boy named Alden. He was a cheerful soul, even though he had lost his family to a terrible accident when he was just five. Now, he lived in his cosy little home with his playful dog, Murphy. Every day, Alden would chop wood for the fire, wash his clothes, and explore the nearby woods for tasty fruits and healing herbs. He also loved to fish in a pond not far from his home.

One chilly day, Alden was out searching for special herbs with his loyal dog Murphy. They wandered too far into the jungle and soon found themselves lost. The cold air made Alden feel sick from all the hard work. Little did he know that this adventure would bring surprises and change his life forever.

In the jungle, there was a house that the villagers of Ravenwood said was haunted. This house once belonged to a great hero named Azgar. According to the village elders, he was not just any hero; he was a warrior with magical powers given to him by the gods. Some stories said he was powerful enough to almost defeat the evil dragon king, Drakonis Maledictus, who wanted to take over the human world.

When Azgar died, the villagers believed that evil spirits came to take his body to the dragon king. But Azgar had a clever plan! He hid the magical door that connected their world to the magical kingdom of Eldoria. Thanks to his quick thinking, humans were kept safe from the evil dragon king. Little did Alden know, his journey in the jungle would uncover these legendary tales and change everything for him.



After wandering around, Alden stumbled upon a house that belonged to Azgar. He guessed it might be a hunter's home because many hunters were starting to build their houses deep in the jungle, far from the village. This location made it easier for them to hunt and enjoy a peaceful life. Alden stepped into an old house, and as soon as he did, many spirits fled in fear of his dog, Murphy. Brave Alden wasn't scared at all; he decided to wait for the owner.

As the night approached, a strong wind blew through the open window, causing a picture of a beautiful flower to fall. Alden noticed a strange handprint on it. Curious, he touched the mark, and suddenly, he was thrown across the room!

After a while, he woke up, feeling different. A powerful energy surged through him, making his skin glow. Looking in a mirror, he saw a star symbol on his neck, and his dark eye colour had changed to blue. He noticed he looked more handsome and even had six-pack abs!

As Alden stood in the fading light, he suddenly heard a mysterious voice around him. "I am the spirit of Azgar," it said softly. Alden felt a strange energy fill the air. "I have given you all my powers," the voice continued, and he could feel them wrapping around him like a warm cloak.

"You can go to Eldoria anytime you want," the spirit told him. "Just summon the magical door with the powers I have given you." Alden's heart raced at the idea of exploring the magical world of Eldoria.

"But remember," Azgar's spirit warned, "you are now the hero of Eldoria. You must defeat the evil Dragon King, Drakonis, who is trying to take over the land."

Alden felt both excited and nervous. Could he really be the hero? With the fate of Eldoria resting on his shoulders, a grand adventure lay ahead of him, ready to change his life forever.

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Khushi

Mar 12, 2025

Noiice noiice lil one ♥️🤌🏻

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Melissa leech

Mar 12, 2025

I thouraly enjoyed the story.

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MANO SIVARJUNAN

Mar 12, 2025

amazing visualisation, giving a realistic feel too, beatuifully crafted master piece, looking forward for the spine chilling adventures. you don't seem like a first time writer, kudos bro :)

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Aman Mishra

Mar 12, 2025

Thank you so much, everyone! I really appreciate all the wonderful feedback. It means a lot to me!

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