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Down goes the Tesla

A poem celebrating the downfall of Tesla

Mar 19, 2025  |   2 min read
Down goes the Tesla
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Down goes the Tesla

Like its stock prices

It fumbles down like its owner

Attempting to demonstrate good design while failing to break a window

As mobs break it apart with malice and ate

While poor widdle baby Elon cries as his empire crumbles

The wheels fall off the truck

With the metal pans that bring pain

To nearby passerbys who with vengeance

Befoul the foul Tesla with obscenities

And Anger as they do the world a favor

By destroying a Tesla without a hell

To care as they rid us of a Tesla eyesore

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E Chance

Mar 19, 2025

This piece is fiery and unapologetic! The imagery and rhythm create a chaotic yet poetic takedown of Tesla’s fall. The satire is sharp, weaving stock crashes, shattered windows, and public outrage into a darkly humorous critique. Bold, unfiltered, and impactful—this one sticks with you!

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Yong Choi Chin

Mar 19, 2025

Good story. Keep it up.

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