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Hi, I’m writing a story, but i want other people to see. I am open to any suggestions

Apr 16, 2025  |   4 min read

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Chapter 3

Before we start at present, we have to start with a love story, a forbidden one in fact. This isn't a cat and dog or a relationship of last names, it's just two species that love each other. Wait? I'm starting way too far, let's start at the beginning.

On a ship, with a wooden mermaid, guiding the ship to islands, far and wide, was a pirate crew, called; ultima. The ultima was most known For hunting mermaids, sirens, and anything under the water.

With their ferocious and powerful captain Jason Long, who never needed to love, not his crew, his family, or anything at all. He only had one eye patch, a wooden prosthetic leg, and a hook on his left hand, and has red hair from all of the work that had been done, and a green eye with a past when you look in his eye, you never want to see it again.

On his whole ship, even people who have been there for years, only so little about his past, besides, whoever asked him, the story always changed. One day it might be how he made Ultima by the death of his family. Or he just wanted to, so no one really knows what his backstory was.

The Ultima had almost 30 pirate crew on his ship ,his crew was different, and I mean different, they were all types of species with pasts they wanted to ignore. Loved ones death, past relationships, family, just themself, all of the above?

And on this crew there was a boy, tucked into a corner with his legs up against his chin, like an egg from the game "CRACK THE EGG"

No older than 20, with brown hair just like a tree stump and eyes just like the ocean blue. His name was Conner Cordel, a new pirate that recently joined the crew.

Under the sea, not seen by the ship Ultima, was a Kingdom of mermaids and sirens, no royalty, no kings or queens, and no presidents to rule.

It was called; the City of Jewels

Everyone has their own kings and queens of their homes. No paper currency or sand dollars, everyone gave everything for free. Before that was a law, there lived a king who was the kindest person in all of the 7 seas, who had a daughter named Pearl, with pearls in her pink hair and blue eyes just like the blue sky. You can never tell how old mermaids and mermen are because they never age, well, until they are about 20 they look 20? forever.

The king felt like he was getting all of the control, and making all of the rules, so he made two rules, his rules were;

1. Money is worthless now, everything is free

2. I will no longer be king, so no royalty Or presidents

The law took action immediately, leaving more happy people in the city of jewels. A few weeks later, the king died of a shark attack. So Pearl was left all alone in a household. Hundreds of mermen want to marry her, but she wants to make sure she finds her one true love, but she had a feeling that he was somewhere else, but Pearl didn't know where or who, or what the consequences there would be.

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