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I'll Be Yours

After a tense morning disagreement with her mom, Lilly spends her entire school day searching for just the right words to make things right again.

Apr 5, 2025  |   4 min read
I'll Be Yours
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Spring sunlight streamed gently through Lilly's bedroom window, casting soft patterns on the carpet. Fourteen-year-old Lilly stormed around her room, pulling drawers open violently, scattering clothes onto the floor, frustration boiling over.

"Mom! Have you seen my soccer uniform? My shoes? They're not where I left them!" Lilly snapped sharply, her voice tinged with adolescent impatience.

Her mom appeared in the doorway, cautious yet patient. "Lilly, I washed them. They're clean, folded, and waiting in the laundry room."

"I wish you'd stop moving my stuff!" Lilly snapped, slamming a drawer shut. "I had everything organized. You don't respect my space at all!"

Her mother sighed softly, her voice calm but strained. "I'm sorry, Lilly. I'll wait in the car, honey. Please hurry,we're already running late."

"Fine," Lilly muttered as her mom turned to go. Under her breath, bitterly, she mumbled, "My real mom would've respected my space."

Her mother's step faltered briefly, then continued quietly down the hall. Lilly's anger instantly evaporated into shame and regret. She cringed, knowing her mother had heard.

Hastily, Lilly made her way to the laundry room, guilt gnawing at her. But as she grabbed her soccer uniform, her eyes fell on an old cardboard box tucked neatly on the shelf. Instantly, memories rushed back.

Five years ago, at nine years old, she'd carried that very box into this house, holding all her belongings from the orphanage. She remembered clearly the stark, impersonal room she'd lived in after her birth mother passed away when she was just five. The orphanage walls were painted a dreary beige, chipped and peeling, echoing the tiredness of too many children living together without a family to call their own. She remembered the cold nights when she would curl up tightly under thin blankets, the faint cries from other rooms gently piercing the heavy silence. The loneliness had felt endless, gnawing at her heart, leaving her wondering if she'd ever truly belong to someone again.

The day her adoptive parents had come to meet her had been unforgettable. She could still vividly recall standing nervously in the orphanage lobby, gripping her cardboard box tightly with sweaty hands. They had smiled so warmly, so genuinely, kneeling down to her level, their eyes filled with compassion and excitement. Her new mother had gently brushed a lock of hair from her face, her touch soft and comforting. Her father's laughter had been reassuring, filling the room with warmth that slowly melted the ice around Lilly's frightened heart.

When she first stepped into her new bedroom, her breath had caught in her throat. The room was painted in delicate shades of lavender and white, sunlight streaming through the window onto a fluffy bed covered with soft, colorful pillows. There were shelves lined with books, a closet full of clothes that actually fit her, and a stuffed bunny waiting patiently on the bed,a small gesture that had meant the world. She had wandered around the room in awe, fingers touching everything gently, as if afraid the dream would dissolve at any moment.

It had taken months before she could whisper the words "Mom" and "Dad." At first, those words felt alien and risky on her tongue, but every bedtime story, every gentle goodnight kiss, every shared meal slowly chipped away at her guarded heart. Those early days were filled with shopping trips for new clothes, adventures at the park, laughter-filled movie nights, and the comforting aroma of freshly baked cookies from the kitchen. Gradually, Lilly's fear had softened into trust, and then blossomed into love.

Lilly's throat tightened painfully as tears welled up in her eyes. "I'm sorry," she whispered to herself, quickly gathering her uniform and racing downstairs.

The car ride to school was silent, heavy. Lilly glanced at her mother several times, desperate to apologize, but the words never came. Her mother remained quiet, eyes fixed on the road, clearly trying to put the painful exchange behind them.

As they arrived at the bustling school loading zone, Lilly jumped from the car, heart still aching with guilt.

"I'll pick you up after soccer practice," her mom called softly, "It's your dad's turn, but he can't make it today."

The day stretched on endlessly,math problems blurred, Shakespeare's verses meaningless, science experiments failed to distract her from her remorse. At lunch, her friends laughed and talked around her, but she sat quietly, lost in thought. Afternoon classes passed in a haze. As the day wore on, Lilly's determination grew stronger, her confidence building. She couldn't wait to see her mom and finally tell her how much she loved her and how deeply sorry she was.

Finally, soccer practice arrived. Each kick, each sprint, was a step closer to seeing her mom again. Relief filled Lilly as practice ended, and she hurried out toward the loading zone. Her mom's car came into view, her mother's gentle smile and wave easing Lilly's anxiety.

A piercing siren shattered the peaceful afternoon. The sound grew louder in an instant, impossibly fast. Around the corner, a black sedan came hurtling onto the school grounds, tires screeching as it mounted the curb. The car tore across the sidewalk, barely missing the flagpole, and careened straight onto the grassy lawn near the loading zone.

A few remaining students from soccer practice shouted in shock, stumbling backward toward the building, their eyes wide with panic. But Lilly didn't have time to move.

Her mother's scream was lost in the chaos.

Impact came violently,Lilly was thrown forcefully to the pavement. Sounds dulled, replaced by a strange, hollow ringing in her ears. She felt broken, trembling, tasting blood. Her mother's frantic, heartbroken voice was suddenly at her side.

"Lilly! Lilly, sweetheart!" her mother sobbed, cradling her daughter's head gently, tears spilling onto Lilly's bloodied cheek.

"Mom," Lilly whispered weakly, consciousness fading. Her voice was strained but filled with deep, overwhelming love. "I'm... sorry... I'll be yours.... I'll always... be yours......"

Emergency sirens howled closer. Police cars followed the fleeing sedan, lights blazing, tires spinning as they continued the chase beyond the loading zone. The fugitive never stopped. The pursuit tore past the school boundaries, vanishing down the road as officers remained in hot pursuit.

EMTs moved swiftly, surrounding Lilly with urgency and practiced precision. One checked her pulse, his face tense. "Weak pulse, shallow breathing," he called sharply.

"Get oxygen started. IV access, now," another EMT instructed quickly. Lilly's pale skin contrasted sharply with the bright tubing and sterile equipment placed around her. Voices overlapped, concise and efficient.

"Blood pressure dropping rapidly. Prepare adrenaline."

"Monitor rhythm closely," came another controlled voice.

An EMT radioed dispatch urgently, his words rapid but clear. "Dispatch, pediatric trauma, critical condition,female, fourteen, severe blunt-force injuries. Vitals unstable, administering fluids and adrenaline. ETA five minutes, have trauma unit ready immediately."

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Rick MI

Apr 14, 2025

I lived a life similar to Lilly's. At seven, I lost both parents and ended up in a group home. I was never adopted and moved to a foster home at eleven. Lilly's pain is something many might not understand; her mother's love for her was always evident despite the hurt. Lilly's story reflects her growing pains. Moving into a new home is a shocking experience in itself. Great story!

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Michaels Lyric

Apr 15, 2025

Thank you so much 💓  I can not express how honored I am that this story resonates with you! This was very difficult to write, emotionally.

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Zezeh

Apr 12, 2025

Very good and absolute app

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Michaels Lyric

Apr 12, 2025

Thank you very much 😊

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