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Invisible Eyes of the Mountain

Life is full of uncertainties and unpredictability, which might have challenged the invisible eyes to be patient and stay optimistic. It’s been a trillion nights of waiting to go back her life as human beings and stay with the man whom she has been dreaming for. However, dreams won’t happen in veracity, as she often dwelled in the mountain as an invisible object. Due to her intricated life, Akira painted many verses, which aimed to touch people, to love and fight their trials in life. She wouldn’t have desires to dwell as human beings after touching the people’s hearts. As she often thought that there hasn’t been a good life to come. She thereafter concluded that her life seemed frustrated and meaningless. In contradict, there was a someone who has been staying for her at the back of her miserable shadow. She rejected her assumptions because she didn’t want to get hurt, as she might find nothing in the reality. Nevertheless, a night pulled her eyes onto the mirror, to believe that someone has been staying, just to keep on motivating her life. Will the invisible eyes believe what she didn’t see?

Mar 1, 2025  |   12 min read

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Ariel Cabasag
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Chapter 1

Chapter 1: Nights as waves

Sizzled nights fully attached at Akira's eyes, while she slept on the bed. What she often imagined, a man, who shut his dazzling eyes at her. It's been a trillion years of feeling in love with the man. Such nights, her eyes fell down on the floor, as she stood; screaming like a rain, which led to fall down the mountain. That night, Akira disappeared in the village. While Mikel, an invisible king in the sky. His eyes were identical with the lamp, due to the invisible eyes luminously attached at him. Mikel fell down on the village, as life changed as human beings.

There have been times, Mikel heard the lady's cry, which lost his arms. The moment he heard the whispered voice, Mikel transformed his image into a man, not a king. Due to enticing eyes, which reflected at Akira's window that often attached by his twilight sight; however, she was an invisible woman to the universe, except James Gabriel, a tyrannical bird, who could gaze and hear, Akira's tears and aspirations. The lovely bird craved to bond with Akira; however, she seemed unbelievable as an object in the universe. The moment the bird flew in the mountain, he often distracted at the witty eyes, which speculate him to stay motivate his life.

That flawless night, Mikel enticed the bird who often yelled in the mountain. He attempted to run away just to stay with the bird. It took a thousand years of trudging the hills, however he didn't find the bird, except the fallen leaf hit by his arms. The leaf stood as a star at night; he wouldn't have believed what he saw, but the bird didn't leave him in the hills. Meanwhile, Akira's eyes produced a snow, which flew down the bird, and put Mikel's hands at the leaf; the moment, an ice attached at Mikel's body on the mountain. Akira felt seventh heaven, how warmth his eyes and hands were; indeed, it could have shaken her hearts like a wave.

That night, Akira seemed regretful, as she looked at her new life. She has been dreaming of living with her dream man. Most of the time, she enticed by Mikel whose body attached by the ice. Due to Akira's tears, the ice faded its moisture on the land, which does have helped the bird to fly again. It's the time to stay with her in the mountain, the bird always sung a beautiful song, which gripped Akira to accept her failure. Indeed, the bird often inspired her, to stay motivated her life.

One night, the bird slept at the purple tree, where Akira dwelled. There have been moments, the leaf often shook, due to the wind, which led the bird fell down at Akira's shoulder. A truly night, when Akira showed her presence by him. It took a night to tell a story, which pulled their shoulders together. They became more than friends, however the invisible girl nodded him not to disclose her secret; how she more than enticed by the unknown man over her dreams. The bird clipped his feather as he looked at her till dawn.

Every day, the bird made an enticing memory with Akira, which endlessly put their hearts as friends. He wanted to carry her, however the bird couldn't have pulled the mountain. That night, the bird found Mikel's body, which has been attached by the ice; hence, he let Akira knew, which created another exciting story. That day, Akira laughed at him," the universe take me a blind, but I could still see him." Then, she disclosed that Mikel has been part of her memory, which made the bird astounding. Well, the bird carried the man and place his body above the leaf; meanwhile, the invisible eyes shut at him. As the wind passed by, the leaves fell down turned into the hills. The bird felt sad as the man faded, which could be opposite with Akira's feelings. She just slept that night, then her eyes were feeling attached by the falling leaves. As she opened her eyes, she found the leaves turned into a man. She let the bird what she saw, the bird notified: "Let him be happy his new life. I couldn't make you happy all the time, but my feather won't be faded, just to cover you."

Seeing his verses which have been planted over the mountain. She couldn't touch the bird, still she felt seventh heaven, to stay with him. That night, Mikel casted back her past, indeed he remembered the village again. He lived alone in the village, which made him fallen sick. That time, he opened the window of his house, timing; an lovely eyes pulled the wall. He concluded that he didn't dwell alone in the city.

That night, Akira put her eyes on the star for a minute, which shook the stars till it fell down at Mikel's window. She felt over the moon, just Mikel lived a happy life. She often saw what the guy did, however she trained her hearts not to get hurt. Meanwhile, Mikel got astonished by the charming eyes attached at his arms. That moment, he noticed that the girl slept beside him, which made their nights exciting.

Mikel spent his time to trudge on the mountain with Lizzy, a woman whom he trusted his life. There was a night of putting their hearts together as friends, which led to intimate feelings. Mikel kept on putting his eyes in the sky, just to carry his nights. However, Lizzy treated him as her friend, no matter what Mikel did to her. There have been times, Mikel carried the hills, as he loved her. That night, he frankly told her," am I still invaluable to you?" Lizzy stared at his blurred eyes, which pulled to the hills, where Akira lived invisibly. As they left the hills, Lizzy told him that," you're not enough to be loved," which fell down his tears on the sea.

It took a year of burying his feelings to her, till Lizzy left on his mind. He usually dwelled on the mountain, where he heard the lovely song of the bird. Due to the lovely lyrics of the bird, Mikel slept down where Akira lived. That night, Akira irresistibly painted by his face, till Akira flashed her shadow on the man.

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blehblehbleh

Apr 10, 2025

YOUR WRITING IS SO STUPID

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Ariel Cabasag

Apr 10, 2025

This looks stupid to someone who doesn't have enough talents in writing. Thanks for your impeccable feedback.

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blehblehbleh

Apr 10, 2025

GARBAGE AND LIFELESS

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Ariel Cabasag

Apr 10, 2025

I know you. You also know me, anyway, I won't spend my time to argue with you. You are such an abysmal waves.

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