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Invisible Eyes of the Mountain

Life is full of uncertainties and unpredictability, which might have challenged the invisible eyes to be patient and stay optimistic. It’s been a trillion nights of waiting to go back her life as human beings and stay with the man whom she has been dreaming for. However, dreams won’t happen in veracity, as she often dwelled in the mountain as an invisible object. Due to her intricated life, Akira painted many verses, which aimed to touch people, to love and fight their trials in life. She wouldn’t have desires to dwell as human beings after touching the people’s hearts. As she often thought that there hasn’t been a good life to come. She thereafter concluded that her life seemed frustrated and meaningless. In contradict, there was a someone who has been staying for her at the back of her miserable shadow. She rejected her assumptions because she didn’t want to get hurt, as she might find nothing in the reality. Nevertheless, a night pulled her eyes onto the mirror, to believe that someone has been staying, just to keep on motivating her life. Will the invisible eyes believe what she didn’t see?

Mar 1, 2025  |   12 min read

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Ariel Cabasag
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Chapter 2: Painted verses

Chapter 2: Painted verses

That night, the bird endlessly flew above Akira's bed, which made Akira felt comfortable to take her night with her friend. Meanwhile, the bird sung a beautiful song, which made Akira fully attracted Mikel as her secret tale, though she had already made a woman whom Mikel should stay with. Due to the lovely rhymes, Mikel woke up and stood, his handy hands touched the bird's feather," can you sing a song for me?" The feather seemed sweet like, how the bay attached the sand in the seashore.

Then, James Miguel, a lovely bird uttered his triumphant verses, which made up Mikel's mind, to look for the beautiful shadow has been passed over his head for a thousand nights. These verses had created a ravishing tale, which gripped forever apart.

"Night yielded as the bay, where bees as tea never be"

"Relentless nights maybe fantasy"

"Like rain often be thy destiny"

"If I lamped the land"

"Like a hand, be often as fanned"

Miguel's lyric

Mikel read the lyrics, with full of jealousy, which led him to see the irresistible eyes on the mountain. It seemed like the hills and sea relentlessly falling apart; hence, he notified the bird to ask the bird," did you see what I saw in the mountain?" Then, the bird gazed at him seemingly, while Akira's eyes covered by his mouth. The bird seemed bashful seeing the man, as he uttered: no man could find what you see, except you." The man believed what he saw, however the bird turned into a grass in the mountain.

Night is full of doubtful why she trusted the man; the man uttered the truth, however she felt down the cave the man's reactions. It's just a glance, her eyes could have the power to convert him into a fantasy. She did the brick that nobody could be trusted, except herself. To hide her identity, she wrote a memoir on the mountain; she planted the verses on the garden, where Mikel found it.

Rainbow as hills

No smile lied at the cynical sea

No hills and bay

Where germane limps

Dwell as it sinks

All nights shuddered as ghost

Like how I dreamt the unknown man

Domicile the autumn as cause

No ever feelings to be loved

Except the connotation of dove

Let's be a grass in the hills

Maybe wind pulled us to be

Let's hide the eyes

Still, a mountain never dies

Let me paint the leaf on the snow

Maybe eyes clipped thy window

All nights, I often to stay

Like how you carry the day

The letter has been planted in the mountain by the invisible girl. These verses could be seen by people, who lost their hopes in the universe, including Mikel. He often read the verses till he altered his minds to stay positive. Like everything might have happened by his life. He must have stayed positive life, which led to fruitful days. Meanwhile, he looked at the mountain again, where she pictured out the good vibes of the shadow. He went back to the mountain, his eyes found the bird filled with his imagination; however, the wind pulled him out. Well, he flew into the sea without fear. What he often believed, the bird might save him, as he jumped down.

What may happen to him in the sea?

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blehblehbleh

Apr 10, 2025

YOUR WRITING IS SO STUPID

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Ariel Cabasag

Apr 10, 2025

This looks stupid to someone who doesn't have enough talents in writing. Thanks for your impeccable feedback.

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blehblehbleh

Apr 10, 2025

GARBAGE AND LIFELESS

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Ariel Cabasag

Apr 10, 2025

I know you. You also know me, anyway, I won't spend my time to argue with you. You are such an abysmal waves.

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