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Invisible Eyes of the Mountain

Life is full of uncertainties and unpredictability, which might have challenged the invisible eyes to be patient and stay optimistic. It’s been a trillion nights of waiting to go back her life as human beings and stay with the man whom she has been dreaming for. However, dreams won’t happen in veracity, as she often dwelled in the mountain as an invisible object. Due to her intricated life, Akira painted many verses, which aimed to touch people, to love and fight their trials in life. She wouldn’t have desires to dwell as human beings after touching the people’s hearts. As she often thought that there hasn’t been a good life to come. She thereafter concluded that her life seemed frustrated and meaningless. In contradict, there was a someone who has been staying for her at the back of her miserable shadow. She rejected her assumptions because she didn’t want to get hurt, as she might find nothing in the reality. Nevertheless, a night pulled her eyes onto the mirror, to believe that someone has been staying, just to keep on motivating her life. Will the invisible eyes believe what she didn’t see?

Mar 1, 2025  |   12 min read

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Ariel Cabasag
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Chapter 3: Electrifying nights



Due to strongly wind pulled him away, Mikel floated on the water, his mouth yelled," be often the day." That phrase meant relentlessly pulled Akira, how she looked at him. She would want to carry his arms, just to hold him. She shifted her arms to hold Mikel's shoulder; let the hands be thy hills. Her voice seemed ravishing, instead of feeling affright above the waves; a moment of feeling electrified of being attached by her charming voice.

Thousands of waves bonked Mikel's body till he sank on the water; the more Akira felt pity to him, indeed her arms endlessly gripped his hands," just stay with me, life seems intricated, yet my hands might be thy hills." Her voice seemed superb, though her image couldn't be found, yet Mikel fully trusted her more than himself. Her craved to utter his words, just to thank with her, however the wind won't unite us to stay with each other.

That night, Lizzy visited the greened sea, where she found the man, filled of pessimistic moment, as she found him. She just wished that Mikel could survive, facing the waves. Looking back the past, she casted back how incredible the man was; however, she couldn't shift her arms just to stay with him in danger. While Akira seemed invisible in the universe, still she could have extended her time, just to save him.

It's been a thousands nights of floating on the water, with the hands of the invisible girl. Mikel kept on facing the challenge, just to search for the invisible person, who endlessly helped him. After a few days, Mikel unable to find the lovely shadow, which has been saving his arms till he fell down under the sea. It can be sad to feel, however Akira truly accepted the veracity that the man should be gone by her life. It couldn't easily erase the bees, however moisture painfully gripped her way.

There have been times, Akira really missed the guy, as she accepted that her life filled with pearl lights on him. While Mikel dwelled under the sea, where he found the shark; his name is Sophia. That fish is considerate, indeed she wanted Mikel to stay happy all the time. She invited him to discover the entire ocean, where Mikel met different fishes and astounding arts, which couldn't be found on the land.

There was a night, Mikel hit his eyes on the giant needle, which made him blind by the terrible night. Hence, he screamed and wanted to die nor to dwell his life; however, as the dawn appeared, his ears loudly heard Akira's voice," put your hearts on the sea," then, he vividly sensed the shadow beside him. It's been a week of not seeing him, the shark felt worried about him; finally, he found the man underneath the brown leaf, where the tears endlessly fell down; hence, the shark thought of bringing him to the room, where she could heal his eyes. She tried to kiss by his lovely face, which Mikel slowly moved his eyes.

Meanwhile, Akira saw what the shark did, which made her felt seventh in heaven. She put her letters on the leaf, as the wind passed by, the leaf fell down on the sea.

-Letter-

Let's thump the sea

As often be the day

Eyed on shark as thy leaf

Where, forever be as gift



No nights I ever pray

Till the feelings always spray

No never nights, I cry

As I enticed how whim thy life

The shark found the letter, she read it in fore of him, which led Mikel able to see again. He filled with heaven, as his eyes could have seen the day. However, his eyes not saw the shark, but a queen on the water. As he faced the mirror, his eyes eyed as a king in the sea. He has possessed his power; to hold the entire sea. He forgot his past, including someone, who has been helping him to grow.

That night, Mikel dreamt how Akira changed his life through the leaf. However, he seemed unbelievable the dreams, what he often thought that he more than powerful any creatures on the earth. His mind could be perceived by Akira, which made her fallen down the hills. Such nights, she trudged on the hills, she casted back the ice was the bird; she seriously looked at the ice. As she stopped looking at it, the ice transformed into a bird again. The bird hugged her shoulder," you're more than a star." Then, she allowed the bird to fly away, " always remember that you are more than a bird." The bird won't leave the place, as he wanted to carry on their friendship again. They have put their hearts again, however their memories won't be back again.

While king Mikel craved to expand his kingdom in the sea because he wanted to dissolve the mountain into a sea. Believing that dissolving the mountains, it could have created a new power; to give an endless existence in the universe. It's been a year of cracking the hills and mountains, which led to death and injustice, indeed the human beings floated on the water after destroying the mountain. That time, Akira got enraged what the guy did; she painted her words on the sea," stop your actions, you will regret what you did to me." What Mikel shown, just to laugh at her.

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blehblehbleh

Apr 10, 2025

YOUR WRITING IS SO STUPID

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Ariel Cabasag

Apr 10, 2025

This looks stupid to someone who doesn't have enough talents in writing. Thanks for your impeccable feedback.

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blehblehbleh

Apr 10, 2025

GARBAGE AND LIFELESS

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Ariel Cabasag

Apr 10, 2025

I know you. You also know me, anyway, I won't spend my time to argue with you. You are such an abysmal waves.

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