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Invisible Eyes of the Mountain

Life is full of uncertainties and unpredictability, which might have challenged the invisible eyes to be patient and stay optimistic. It’s been a trillion nights of waiting to go back her life as human beings and stay with the man whom she has been dreaming for. However, dreams won’t happen in veracity, as she often dwelled in the mountain as an invisible object. Due to her intricated life, Akira painted many verses, which aimed to touch people, to love and fight their trials in life. She wouldn’t have desires to dwell as human beings after touching the people’s hearts. As she often thought that there hasn’t been a good life to come. She thereafter concluded that her life seemed frustrated and meaningless. In contradict, there was a someone who has been staying for her at the back of her miserable shadow. She rejected her assumptions because she didn’t want to get hurt, as she might find nothing in the reality. Nevertheless, a night pulled her eyes onto the mirror, to believe that someone has been staying, just to keep on motivating her life. Will the invisible eyes believe what she didn’t see?

Mar 1, 2025  |   12 min read

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Ariel Cabasag
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Chapter 4: Revenge

Chapter 4: Revenge

It's a rainy night, including the icy wind passed by the waves. What the bird thought, it's normal, however he didn't see the mountain anymore, a place where he could sleep. He felt forlorn of not seeing the girl, who has been staying by his arms. Instead of taking his sleep, he kept on flying above the waves. It could be tired to fly without taking rest in the tree, yet no tree existed anymore.

While Akira cried as her eyes saw that the mountain has been dissolved by the water. She remained silent while staring at the sea, where Mikel lived. That night, Mikel finally owned the entire earth; as promised, his existence will be forever. What he believed, he's more power than God. He could control the stars, moon, and wind not to function in the universe. Due to his actions, many people birds, and other creatures died.

There have been nights, Akira unable to breath, due to what the man did to the mountain. She didn't want to hurt him, indeed she didn't cross his decision. However, the night, the bird went to the ocean, just to ask for another mountain, where he could live. What Mikel did was, he gripped the bird's feathers, then he let the shark to eat his body. He yelled like a thunder; uncontrollably, the invisible girl eyed at Mikel's hands, which led to fall. Meanwhile, the shining star passed by," do you still remember him? He's your former friend, right?" That time, Mikel looked at him," stop blocking my way, I am powerful than you." Then, he pushed the entire sea at Akira's body, which led Akira not to move her body. It's sad moment, what he did to her. The bird kept on staying at back of Akira's body, just to let her fight.

Due to the terrible actions, Akira allowed herself to do something, which avoided to that to him before. Well, she put her hands on the water, while her eyes looked at the sea. In a minute, the sea converted into hills again, where Mikel couldn't walk; his legs became disabled. Akira approached him," I don't want to do that to you, but you take a revenge with me, who has been helping you grow." Meanwhile, the bird flew down the ground, where Akira stood.

"I am sorry, Akira"

"I can put your words in my heart, yet I can't heal your legs again."

"Please?"

The bird interrupted," you should learn to appreciate the people, who have been helping you grow not to betray them." A night clipped on the tree, where the bird transformed into a handsome man, who seemed lovely at Akira's side.

"Is this you, Miguel?"

That time, Mikel revealed the veracity that he has been in loved with her. He indeed recalled the times, when he fully admired her; due to her respect. Akira allowed him to be physical well. However, she closed her way to keep on talking with him.

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blehblehbleh

Apr 10, 2025

YOUR WRITING IS SO STUPID

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Ariel Cabasag

Apr 10, 2025

This looks stupid to someone who doesn't have enough talents in writing. Thanks for your impeccable feedback.

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blehblehbleh

Apr 10, 2025

GARBAGE AND LIFELESS

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Ariel Cabasag

Apr 10, 2025

I know you. You also know me, anyway, I won't spend my time to argue with you. You are such an abysmal waves.

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