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Invisible Eyes of the Mountain

Life is full of uncertainties and unpredictability, which might have challenged the invisible eyes to be patient and stay optimistic. It’s been a trillion nights of waiting to go back her life as human beings and stay with the man whom she has been dreaming for. However, dreams won’t happen in veracity, as she often dwelled in the mountain as an invisible object. Due to her intricated life, Akira painted many verses, which aimed to touch people, to love and fight their trials in life. She wouldn’t have desires to dwell as human beings after touching the people’s hearts. As she often thought that there hasn’t been a good life to come. She thereafter concluded that her life seemed frustrated and meaningless. In contradict, there was a someone who has been staying for her at the back of her miserable shadow. She rejected her assumptions because she didn’t want to get hurt, as she might find nothing in the reality. Nevertheless, a night pulled her eyes onto the mirror, to believe that someone has been staying, just to keep on motivating her life. Will the invisible eyes believe what she didn’t see?

Mar 1, 2025  |   12 min read

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Ariel Cabasag
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Chapter 5: Indelible ending

Chapter 5: Indelible ending

The night, Miguel relentlessly hugged the girl, who fell down her tears. She let him know that she has been in love with Mikel. However, the reality won't allow her to stay with him. She became one Miguel's friends till they loved each other.

One night, Miguel brought her to the green mountain, where he painted his compelling story for her. He put the verses at in front of the leaf, which allowed Akira to read and absorb lovely verses over her eyes. That night, Miguel asked her," may you sit my back?" After responding," yes" the handsome man transformed into a bird again, he flew into the entire universe. So far Akira felt over the moon as she travelled with him. Unexpectedly, the airplane feather hit at his arms, which led Akira to fall on the ocean. She cried as the man had faded, she attempted to use her power. Unfortunately, she couldn't use her power, while waiting on the water. One feather fell down into the water; it clipped at Akira's body and carried the body on the land. She felt forlorn at that night; unexpectedly, one feather transformed into a charming man again.

"I won't allow my feather to leave," Miguel said.

"Is this still you?'

"Allow me to put my feathers in you, as I always stuck in you."

"Seeing your efforts and hands, I might fell down the sea, just to fall thy."

"You're forever in my hearts, Akira."

Then the shining stars put their arms together above the sea, where the nights made them as spectacle fantasy.

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blehblehbleh

Apr 10, 2025

YOUR WRITING IS SO STUPID

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Ariel Cabasag

Apr 10, 2025

This looks stupid to someone who doesn't have enough talents in writing. Thanks for your impeccable feedback.

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blehblehbleh

Apr 10, 2025

GARBAGE AND LIFELESS

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Ariel Cabasag

Apr 10, 2025

I know you. You also know me, anyway, I won't spend my time to argue with you. You are such an abysmal waves.

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