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LUCIFER MORINGSTAR

In the oppressive heat of Indiana, Paramoush endures a living hell. Bullied at school and abused at home, his few sources of solace – his brother Jeffry and friend Martin – are brutally stripped away. Martin's betrayal shatters his fragile trust, pushing him to a breaking point. A dark, resonating voice infiltrates his despair, whispering of vengeance. Awakening from a blackout, Paramoush is claimed by the voice, "I am Lucifer." He discovers a chilling power over shadows, drawn to a book mirroring his own fall. He becomes a vessel for dark retribution. At the voice's command, he uses his newfound power to murder his father, the architect of his misery. The voice then directs him towards Martin, but the true horror lies beyond this act of vengeance. The subtle implication that the darkness he wields is spreading, a contagion beyond his control, hints at a terrifying escalation. The shadows have not just killed his father, they have begun to corrupt everything around Paramoush, signaling a descent into a much deeper, more insidious darkness.

Mar 14, 2025  |   6 min read

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THE BIRTH



In the suffocating humidity of Indiana, Paramoush existed, not lived. He was a canvas for others' cruelty: Mark and Terrize, the schoolyard tormentors, whose laughter echoed with the sharp sting of humiliation; his father, a man whose love was a twisted, violent thing.

Paramoush clung to fragments of light: Jeffry, his younger brother, a fragile echo of hope, and Martin, the friend who promised escape. But even those flickered and died. One afternoon, the hallway's whispers turned into a blade, piercing his fragile trust. Martin, the anchor, the confidant, was now a betrayer, his laughter laced with the same venom as their tormentors.

The night that followed was a descent into a chasm of despair. Sleep offered no solace, only a voice, a dark, resonating whisper that coiled around his soul: "Why endure? Why not retaliate?"

The next day, the inevitable collision occurred. Martin's accusation, a fabricated theft, was the spark. The ensuing violence, the kicks, the jeers, were a ritualistic humiliation. Even Jeffry, small and terrified, could only watch.

He returned home, a broken figure, only to face his father's wrath. The swollen face, the silent plea, were met with the brutal, familiar punishment. The breaking point arrived. Paramoush, in a moment of desperate, futile rage, lunged at his father, a move that only resulted in him being thrown across the room. He saw Jeffry escape, a fleeting silhouette against the night, before the world went black.

The rope snapped. He fell, a broken doll, but something within him had irrevocably changed. The pain, the fear, were replaced by a chilling emptiness, a void filled by a voice that was not his own: "I am Lucifer."

He found himself drawn to the library, to an ancient, leather-bound book: *The Angel Kicked Out from Heaven: Lucifer*. The words resonated, the story a mirror reflecting his own descent. He was no longer a victim; he was a vessel.

That night, the dreams twisted, the mirror reflecting a stranger. Dark, predatory eyes, a smirk that was not his own, and the phantom ache of unfolding wings. The voice returned, insistent: "To your father."

He moved through the house, a shadow among shadows. His father sat, oblivious, the architect of his misery. Paramoush raised his hand, and the darkness obeyed. It crept from the corners, a living entity, a noose of shadow tightening around his father's throat. The man's eyes widened, a silent scream trapped in his throat.

"Pa...ra...moush..."

He smiled, a cold, empty expression. The shadows consumed, the screams fading into the oppressive silence of the house.

The voice echoed, a promise and a command: "To Martin."

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Mar 14, 2025

good please quickly upload chapter 3

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