Romance

My Love

I'm not asking you to love me, laugh and despise my poor poetry, do as you please and the harp is yours. don't just change the verse. If you are reading a vague poem before you judge, dig and bend, check the plaza and guess first and will be identified clearly and accurately. Once you love someone you know what l feel.

Feb 21, 2024  |   6 min read
Shanenee
Shanenee
My Love
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For perusing, love, acknowledge my appreciation 

That you, this, my undertaking commendable find. 

Uprightness whenever needed, as my concern, 

The prize may yet present the looking through the mind. 

A look may consider it harsh and crude, 

Its strip may some unripe looks show, 

Yet, whenever tasted past the outside tone, 

Liberal perusers may yet think that it's sweet. 

Neither that you should this sonnet treasure 

Nor do I ask that you should despise mask. 

Do as you will and satisfy your relaxation, 

However, ask, the sections you ought not to reexamine. 

If you should discover numerous stanza dark, 

Before your stamp of judgment put, 

If you however stop, between the lines, investigate, 

Perchance you think that it's reasonable and right for sure. 

Betimes you'll discover markers for documentation 

Applied on some language of subtler variety, 

Counsel the references for clarification, 

Renders the significance more clear as you read. 

What's more, here I stop, a virtuoso of a peruser, 

In case my destiny may acquire 

Nor clichés make my stanzas more clear, 

Modifications can self-rout submit. 

If I should wander from my musings examine 

Those long periods of adoration, past and profoundly grieved, 

Be it dark, could I a word uncover 

Aside from my love, in my heart enthroned? 

The similar love did consistently incite 

Wild misgivings that she may sell out 

Our adoration sold out, perforce persevere through the burden 

Of destiny to soak in perpetual hopelessness. 

Could I have the solidarity to such scrutiny defer 

Such strong records of broken sentiment: 

Her careful attention, to me she gave, 

Which I paid for with persistence. 

Sweet days are gone, those long periods of ecstasy packed, 

With nothing left save love's unquenched fire; 

Inside my heart will very much want to resonate 

Until this spirit from a cadaver will resign. 

Now that I wind up in state desolate 

I call the solidarity to reverse my sorrow, 

In remembering days when love was conceived, 

Else in your picture track down, melancholy's sweet alleviation. 

That picture which my affection's pencil writ, 

In my entire being do I imprint; 

The fortune
which to me adored hand down, 

With me stays until past the grave. 

This similar soul did regularly dismiss 

Furthermore, falter at regions you would visit: 

At the Beata stream made a stay, 

At Hilo shallows, numerous visits are spent. 

My memory frequently would look for 

Our meeting underneath the mango branch: 

You woulda mango pack endeavor to pick; 

While I, by you, a Hedonist enow! 

When you with genuine sickness remained behind, 

My being was diminished to vulnerable moans. 

To paradise's effortlessness my pulse I transferred, 

Your room is considered prized heaven. 

With my own, I pampered with strokes 

Effects you had on the stone stage shore 

Of the Makati which we both love 

Your picture did I love evermore. 

There regularly returned in a quest for a few 

Illusive impulses of cheerful bygone eras: 

A bather trusts that the sprinkle will come 

Yet, to the water heads, in case of shower refrains. 

I hear it still, your words resound: 

"Full three days now, each other we've not seen", 

What's more, my answer to you without lament: 

"For every, how often pre-arranged we've been!" 

Indeed, there's not a stone that is left unturned 

Agonizing on the destiny of sweet satisfaction blurred. 

"Poor me!" so moaning, myself I hated 

Heavy tears with mine groan fell. 

Where is my love, the daylight of my heart? 

For what reason did we neglect to support our sentiment? 

Whither the days when life and soul were part 

Of that paradise generated of her look? 

I can't help thinking about why, since we are separated, 

Ought not this pitiful existence of mine lapse? 

Since, my love, from my heart you should withdraw 

Passing's sweet alleviation is my one final craving. 

Lacking the solidarity to suffering an injury 

From satisfaction's abandonment, you on my force, 

I dare to sing this existence of hopelessness 

My refrains may my enduring discard. 

A surfeit of quietness, my love, I entreat 

They to hear me with ears and a receptive outlook 

My dream, if oblivious and weak of discourse, 

Supplicate, an award that she should
your extravagance find. 

Bereft might be of a lettered style 

These first buds of my judiciousness juvenile, 

My devotion take with resistance, 

Your devoted worker does of you entreat. 

Should any line thereof be considered hostile? 

My modest endeavors track down a commendable pardon 

That if disdain should it's understanding give 

Absolution the creator, ask, without misuse. 

To fun sprites of Bai Lake, 

To mermaids with sweet charming voices, 

My unassuming dream does her appeal make 

That every one of their charms and abilities may have. 

Mother Nature, hear my request: 

Your lyre's tune may to my verses loan, 

Verses that discuss love's desire 

To rise above Time's remains through to life's end. 

Dear heart, a blossom of my reflection, 

My love with the initials LOVE, 

May the Spirit request 

Award you for your government assistance supplicates.

Amidst bleak timberland forlorn 

With prickly underbrush so thickly developed, 

The which so harsh as difficult to explore 

Indeed, even by him who is a man of acceptance. 

Huge impressive tall trees the scene's contribution, 

The quality of torment, torment, and distress, 

Birds sing not yet a tune so discouraging 

In any event, for one with happiness intensive. 

Each tree limb sports its enhancement 

Of twining plants lavishly wrapped tricky 

With bushy leafy foods thistles as an article of clothing 

The lightest touch would mortal agony force.

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