Comedy

Raindrops, Roadblocks, and Roasted Peanuts

Caught in a torrential downpour on her commute home, Dina faces an unexpected choice between a pricey toll road and a chaotic side street brimming with street vendors, potholes, and unpredictable strangers. What starts as a simple detour turns into a comedic adventure filled with flapping windshield wipers, peanut negotiations, and an unlikely passenger with stories as wild as the storm.

Nov 11, 2024  |   4 min read
Raindrops, Roadblocks, and Roasted Peanuts
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Dina settled deeper into her seat, the leather creaking in protest. The rain continued its relentless assault, now joined by the rhythmic percussion of thunder that rumbled like an angry giant. As her car inched forward, she glanced at her gas gauge, which was dropping with the sluggish determination of a snail crawling uphill. If she were lucky, she'd get home before her tank ran dry. If not, well, she'd be pushing her tiny sedan through a downpour that could turn an umbrella inside out.

Suddenly, her phone buzzed in the cup holder. She snatched it up, hopeful for a moment, but the screen taunted her with its dreaded notification: "No Network Connection." Dina groaned. If only she could check her route or call someone to whine about her situation - both of which would be useless but satisfying. Instead, she was left to her own devices, which, in this case, meant yelling at the universe and listening to her playlist that hadn't updated since last year. A tinny pop song started playing, a relic from a summer long gone. Dina reached for the dial and turned it down, muttering, "Not now, nostalgia."

As she passed a row of motorcycles pulled over under makeshift shelters of blue tarps and wobbling bamboo poles, she noticed the vendors hadn't given up. If anything, they had multiplied, as if the rain itself had spawned them. A man with a basket of assorted snacks, including a dubious variety of fried something, waved at her with an enthusiasm only a commission-based salary could fuel. Next to him, a woman brandished umbrellas like a sword merchant, screaming, "Better than getting wet, miss! Special price for you!"

Dina shook her head firmly, but the woman mimed wiping a tear from her eye, clutching an umbrella to her chest like a
long-lost friend. It was so melodramatic that Dina laughed, the sound filling the car and briefly lifting the weight of the evening.

Her attention was abruptly diverted by a sudden thump. The car jolted as one wheel dipped into a pothole so deep it might as well have been a portal to the center of the earth. She cursed under her breath, teeth clattering from the jolt. Her eyes darted to the rearview mirror. The bag stuck to her wiper was now joined by a torn flyer that flapped with such determination it looked ready to launch into flight.

The rain began to ease slightly, though not enough to call it a reprieve. A figure appeared in the glow of her headlights, illuminated by the misty downpour like a mirage. He stood in the middle of the road, waving frantically. Dina's heart leaped into her throat. Was this a roadblock? A scam? A drenched ghost with unfinished business?

She slowed to a near stop, rolling down her window just enough to be heard but not splashed. "Hey, what's going on?" she called out, trying to keep her voice steady. The man approached, shaking water out of his hair like a wet dog. He was young, probably just out of college, with an expression of mixed excitement and exasperation.

"Miss, I need help! I ran out of fuel," he said, pointing to an old motorbike parked by the side of the road. "Can I hitch a ride to the nearest gas station? I'll pay you back in peanuts." He gestured toward the peanut vendor who was now engaging in a heated debate with a corn seller over territory.

Dina bit her lip, glancing around. The rain seemed lighter now, and cars were starting to move a little more quickly. The idea of being a Good Samaritan
on this cursed evening had its appeal - plus, she'd be the protagonist of her own dramatic story later. "Hop in. But keep the peanuts," she said, trying to sound more confident than she felt.

The stranger grinned, revealing a chipped tooth. "You're a lifesaver, miss!" He ran around to the passenger side and slid in, water pooling around his sneakers. "Name's Andi, by the way."

"Dina," she replied. "Seatbelt, please. This isn't a roller coaster, but it might feel like one."

As they drove through puddles that splashed high enough to impress a dolphin, Andi squirmed. "Thanks for this. Been stuck here for an hour, and everyone else just ignored me."

Dina shrugged, the corners of her mouth lifting. "Well, you owe me a good story to tell when I get home."

"Oh, I've got stories," Andi said, his eyes twinkling mischievously. "Like the time I got chased by a chicken vendor in the rain because I promised to pay 'next time.' Turns out, chickens hold grudges."

Dina snorted. Maybe this detour wasn't so bad after all. The rain softened to a drizzle, the peanut vendor waved as if he knew her personally now, and somewhere behind them, the road to the toll remained flooded, filled with commuters wondering why they'd spent half a paycheck to be trapped in a watery standstill.

As Dina steered the car toward the faint glow of a gas station sign in the distance, she felt a surprising warmth in her chest. Even on days when everything seemed to go wrong, a little shared adventure could make it all feel a lot more right.

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