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Shay! (revised)

This is a revise of the first story posted "Shay" it makes better since. This is a spin off of "Love Story Unwritten"

Dec 20, 2024  |   10 min read

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SHAY!

Teah met Shay, at a hair convention in Atlanta Georgia.

After seeing Shay's talent, she had to have her on her team at her new Salon and Boutique in Chicago.

Shay was happy as hell when she moved from Atlanta to Chicago.

She knew one day her skills and talent would take her far and now was the time to show them off.

Teah met another stylist her name was Ginger. Teah helped Ginger, find new love.

When Ginger lived in Atlanta, she was being abused by her boyfriend. When Teah met Ginger at the Hair Convention, Ginger was running from her boyfriend at the time. Ginger told Teah what was going on. Teah hid Ginger in a Hotel for a couple of days until they left for Chicago.

Ginger too was talented, she knew fashion, how to design clothes and also, did hair and nails. Ginger moved to Chicago, got married, to a wealthy man, and had two kids and didn't look back.



Shay and Teah became really good friends.

Teah did a lot for her and her new Stylist.

The name of Teahs salon was, "Teah's hair salon and boutique of 3!" one of the most popular salons on the block, with three of the most talented and gorgeous women in the city.

Teah gave them a "welcome to the Salon and boutique" celebration, and when they got their first famous client, she let them skip on the booth fee. she helped them buy new cars, and new homes.

Teah wasn't a stylist she just was one of the best in the business; and had her own clients. The salon stayed packed, people from all over, from the hood rich, to the rich and famous came to the salon.



Shay made a lot of money, more than she did when she lived down South. Everyone in Chicago loved her styles, they were different. She would alternate doing hair and nails. Working in Chicago Shay got more clientele, a bigger house, and a car. She didn't have a car in Atlanta, she used the Marta train, or bus, or caught rides with friends and family, or she would walk to her clients.

Before Shay moved to Chicago, she was living in a small two-bedroom apartment, with her twin brother Shawn, his fat alcoholic fianc� Bee, and their three-year-old, baby Shawn.

The walls were paper thin, it had a kitchenette, a small living area, (where Shay slept) and a small bathroom.

Bee, was at least 300 lbs. She was full figured, Dark skin, with shoulder length thick nappy hair, big brown oval shaped eyes, full nose, full dark lips, and white teeth with a small gap. She talked loudly and had a jolly laugh that you can hear a mile away. She was an attractive woman in some ways but in other ways, she made herself look unattractive like when she would drink.

Bee would get drunk, and try to start arguments with Shay. Shay would ignore a lot of the things she would do and say.

Bee didn't like Shay; she always thought she was sneaky for some reason.

Bee couldn't stand that Shawn had a twin sister, Shay looked and act just like Shawn. They were identical.

They would do identical things even when they weren't together. They knew when each other would be sick, because they would both be sick at the same time. They loved the same foods, they knew when the other was hungry, they loved the same color and sometimes without even knowing, wore the same colors on the same day.

Bee was so jealous of them, she would say little things like, "Yall really don't look that much alike", and "I don't see how y'all twins", "who the hell said y'all was twins anyway!?", "Yo Mamma!!?", "or the doctor!?" she would say when she got drunk.

Shay despised her ever since she said that shit.



Before Shay moved in with her brother, her and her boyfriend Nate, lived in a one-bedroom efficiency above a shop that burned down.

After she almost lost everything in the fire, and thought that would be the worse, a woman called her and said she was four weeks pregnant with Nate's baby.

Nate left Shay for the woman; and married her, he'd only known for six months. He and Shay had been together for four years and she never got pregnant but stayed engaged.

Shay was brokenhearted and depressed for a while. She had nothing left but her hair supplies, a couple of clients and her brother's couch.

They had planned to get married, and this motherfucka had a whole other life, and right down the street.

Right now, today, she thinks that bitch, burned down her apartment.

Shay would see red! when she had to do Bee's hair and nails for free.

Bee had some thick nappy ass hair; it took all day when it came to doing her hair.

When she wanted braids, it would hurt Shay's hands her hair was so thick, so that took extra-long. Sometimes Bee would be so drunk, she couldn't sit up or sit still. She would fall asleep right while Shay was doing her hair, so Shay couldn't finish her hair, until the next day.

Sometimes when Shay had clients come to her, and Bee wasn't there, Shawn would get her clients numbers, telling them he didn't have a woman and that he would pay for their hair and nails if they would go out with him. Bee would come bouncing through the door, with groceries, and baby Shawn. She would walk over to Shawn, give him a wet kiss on the mouth, and say, "Hey Babe!!" while looking over at the client, with a dirty look, then look at Shay, and roll her eyes.

Shay would just shake her head, and not say a thing, and neither did the client.

One day, Shay just got done with a client, and was putting her stuff away.

Bee walked over to her, head just a wobbling and pointing at Shay's bag of hair supplies.

"Bitch!!", "I need my hair done!!", "for this party tomorrow!!" words slurring, because she was drunk as hell.

Shay looks at her with a disgusting look and said, "First off!!", "who are you calling a bitch!!", "second off!!", "I'm going to have to start charging you!", "like my regular clients!!", Shay said, pointing a rat tail comb in her direction. "Because it takes all day!!", "and I could be doing other client's hair and nails to" Shay said, putting her things, in her hair case.

Bee looked at her, with crazed eyes, that were blood shot red, from drinking all day. She thought because Shay had to live with her and her brother, she could talk to her any kind of way.

"What choo mean!!", "charge me?!", she snarled, and lowered her eyes into small slits.

"You must not have heard me!!", "because you're drunk"!! Shay raised her voice a little louder. "I said you're going to have to pay me, like the rest of my clients!!", "or go somewhere else!", Shay said. Putting last of her things, in her bag, closing it up, and then sitting in a chair at the table.

Bee walked over to where Shay was sitting, and put her finger in Shay's face.

Shay, sat there calmly, because she knew, if this girl swing, it's over.

Shay, was going to make this fat bitch, touch everything in the apartment.

"I ain't payin you for shit!!" Bee said, slowly and balling up her fist from the finger she was pointing, like she was going to hit Shay.

Shay sat there, still calm.

"This is my house!!", "Bitch!!!", Bee said, spitting.

Shay watched the spit fly out of her mouth, and on to the table.

"The deal was, if yo ass want to stay here", "I get my hair and nails done for free!" she said, still in Shay's face.

Shay stood up, waved her hand in front of her nose a couple of times, then bumped Bee out of her way.

"Excuse me!", "Get the hell out of my face!!", "with that drunk ass, hot ass breath", "spittin everywhere!", "I'm glad it ain't make it to my face!", "I would have knocked your ass, clean out!!", "now move!!", "and you heard, what I said!".

Shay said, while she walked over to the fridge, got a bottle of water, opened it up, and took a sip.

Bee walked over, and tried to slammed the fridge shut.

It almost caught Shay's hand, and she almost dropped the bottle of water.

"Girl!!" she shouted "Watch out!", "and Quit playin with me!!", Shay said and walked back to the table to sit down.

Bee was on her trail back to the table, head wobbling, and foaming at the mouth.

"Bitch!!", "I said do my hair!!", "Or get the fuck out!" she said, standing over Shay, breathing and mad.

"Go on now, Bee" Shay said, putting up her free hand and the bottle of water in the other, "I don't have time to be explaining to my brother, why you are knocked out, on the floor, when he walks through that door!!" Shay said, about to put the bottle of water up to her mouth.

It didn't make it to her mouth, because Bee smacked her, and the bottle of water. The bottle went flying in the air, across the kitchen table on to the floor, water went everywhere, all over Shay's face, and clothes.

Shay was in shocked for a split second, and then...Before Shay knew it!! she dropped Bee!!

Bayam!! Right in her jaw!!

She hit her so hard, Bee dropped to the floor like a sack of potatoes.

Bee was laid out on the floor for a couple seconds, before Shay bent over to check to see if she was breathing, she was, and Shay left her ass laying right on the damn floor.

"I'm tired of you fuckin with me!!", "with yo Fat ass!!". Shay said using her shirt to wipe the water off of her face almost slipping from the water on the floor.





Bee opened her eyes, a minute later, not knowing where she was.

"Where am I?!", she asked, still on the floor, rubbing her jaw, and eyes fluttering.

Shay looked down at her, and spoke.

"I knocked your ass out, bitch!", "now get up!!", "you're still at home!!" Shay said, stepping over Bee, walking to baby Shawns room to see if he was still asleep, he was knocked out like his momma. Shay kind of chuckled but felt bad. She closed the door softly, and went and sat in the living room area until her brother came home.

Bee got up off the floor and went into her bedroom and slammed the door.

Shay knew when her brother came home, he was going to be on this fat bitch side. He loved that fat bitch, but she hated her.

Shay started to think if she made a mistake by hitting Bee like that. She didn't think about it until after it was done.



Shay's mamma left her and her brother with their daddy when they were five, to be with another man, and her dad was a first prize fighter and had to raise them the best way he could.

Shay got her size from her momma; she was small and petite, about 160lbs, had the figure of a stallion, naturally curly hair, she kept short, long legs that never ended, very fit, because she walked without a car, dark skin, big brown eyes, naturally long eyelashes, women were going out to buy, a small nose, full lips, and pretty straight teeth.

Shay saw her daddy knock men out that was three times his size with one punch. Her brother Shawn was just as good with his hands, he'd learn from their dad and he'd also taught Shay to defend herself because of her size.



When Shawn got home, Bee was so drunk, she couldn't remember nothing but the punch.

Bee told Shawn, that Shay hit her because she didn't feel like doing her hair, and nails.

Shawn was so tired, he didn't have anything to say, at least not that night.

After the fight, Bee started to act funny, and would do sneaky shit, like invite people over late at night, knowing Shay had to sleep on the couch, leaving lights on that shined in the living room where Shay was sleeping, she would leave baby Shawn with her all day, knowing she had appointments that day.

She lied, and told Shawn she snuck guys in, and she would hear them having sex, with baby Shawn in the next room, while he was at work.

When Bee and Shawn would have sex, Bee would be loud on purpose.

It was so bad; the fat bitch hollered the whole time; it echoed through the whole building.

Shay knew she was trying to be funny.

Bee knew, Shay was in the next room, so she would yell Shawn's name out loud on purpose.

"Eww yuck!!!", "Bitch!!" "Your son is in the other room!!", Shay thought.

"Is this bitch trying to make me jealous?", Shay thought

"Because she knows, I ain't got no man?", Shay thought.

Shay got sick to the stomach, and threw up a little in her mouth, the very thought, of that fat bitch being naked and having sex was making her sick.

Next thing you know, her brother came running out of the bedroom, into the bathroom.

Shay heard him throwing up.

Shay laughed out loud, because she knew why it happen.

One day, Shay was coming out of the building, and ran into the neighbor, she be so embarrassed coming outside because of all the hollering that fat bitch was doing.

"What the hell do he be doing to that girl over there?", the neighbor asked.

"I don't know, but I know for sure, he ain't that big, because he's my brother, we took baths together when we were little", they both laughed.

A week later Shay brother came to her, and told her she had to move out, because he couldn't stand the tension between the two, and that Bee was pregnant again, and they needed the space.

Shay asked her brother to give her a little more time so she can find a place.

He gave her two weeks.

The week before all this occurred Shay entered to go to a Famous Hair and Nails Convention, giving by some very famous people in Atlanta Georgia. When she entered this convention and got selected, she did not know her life was about to change.

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