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The Innocent Devil

This is a story of innocent boy who gains supernatural powers and then takes revenge.

Feb 21, 2024  |   8 min read

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Ayush A Raj
The Innocent Devil
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There are many types of students studying in school together, some are fast some slow, shy, innocent, decent, naughty, this is the story of a simple boy who gets a supernatural power which was a combo of both science and nature. 

A boy, whose name was Raz studying in a Saint school of India, Maharastra, a simple guy with a very few friends, was the student of class 11th. Nobody was more close to him except a girl whom he thinks is her best friend. A very simple boy who even doesn't tell his problem to others. Just like other 

students, he was also having a lots of dreams. That boy was very close to nature than science, he used to explore natural things, natural insects and his most favorite one was fireflies that glows at night. Today he went to school and there he talks to his best friend her name was Maya and there he gets to know 

that tomorrow is her birthday, then Maya asks "what will you gift me? " he smiles and says something very special that you will definitely like, she was happy and curious too at the same time. She invited every student in the class to her birthday party. Next day, when everybody arrived at the party venue there many student gifted her many expensive things and Raz gifted her a glass pot filled with fireflies, it was looking outstanding and was acting like a natural lamp everybody laughed at him and said to him insects brings insects only and Maya refused to take the gift because she was expecting something expensive, and she became very irritated and asked Raz to walk out from the party. Raz took it very seriously after all this insult ignorance all the time he decided to commit suicide and he attempted, 

God saved him but he was severely injured his parents took him to the hospital, and their doctor after several inspections and examining said his brain is injured and to save his life they had to perform a very critical and serious surgery, that will save Raz's life but he may be affected in another way there is very minimal chance of success and if that will be successful he may go to coma ( limitless sleep ) and this is the only and last way ,you have to decide quickly or he will lose his life. His parents got agreed and completed all the hospital formality. Doctors started the surgery and at the same, their parents outside the operation theater were in intense pain for his son, somehow Maya got to know about this incident first she goes to Raz's house there she gets to know the hospital address where Raz is admitted she 

comes to the hospital in a rush realizing his fault with a low feeling on her face she felt very bad about his behavior of that day for Raz, after reaching hospital she met Raz's parents outside the operation theater waiting for the results, she visits them and starts crying and Raz's parents start crying to then she tells the reason why Raz tried to commit suicide. their parents understand and do not scold Maya, when Maya says it's all her fault they console her that she was not aware that Raz will do all this if she refuses his gift. They wait outside the operation theater after sometimes doctors come out and says that the operation is successful but we have to wait for few hours to see Raz's gains consciousness or not, their parents were expressionless either to be happy for successful surgery or to cry for not sure that their son will raise from bed or will remain sleeping on the bed for limitless time. Raz's mother starts crying than Raz's father and Maya console her by saying he will surely wake up in few hours, they wait, Maya bring food to them they were not ready to eat food she says please have some food everything will be fine Raz will surely wakeup. After hours doctor examines Raz in each half-hour and at last, the doctors with low faces inform Raz's parents that he went under coma a long limitless sleep after listening to this Raz's parents and Maya starts crying doctors say everything is in now gods hand pray to him that he may rise early from that evil sleep. They goes to church and prays to God this happens for a long time everyday nurse gives medicine to Raz their parents visit timely to the hospital and they goes tochurch every day and pray for him .They start donation to help needy the donate clothes to poor beggars thinking that by seeing this one day God will surely give strength to their son that he will wake up one day.

 One day after many years when the nurse went to give medicine to Raz she founds that Raz was not in bed she got confused and went to the doctor shouting doctor! doctor! and tells the doctor that Raz is not in bed doctor was surprised and he searched the whole hospital but Raz was nowhere in the hospital doctor informed his parents and after searching for the whole day they goes to the police station and gives the missing complaint of Raz and again with the sad face, they return to their house praying. Police goes to the hospital and starts gathering information there nurse tells the suicide attempt story, Raz's surgery, going to coma and sleeping for many years and yesterday he was not in his bed, the investigation police officer was surprised by listening to this then he goes to Raz's house and asks for the pic of Raz they said they are having his childhood photo then police collects Raz's current photo from the hospital file of Raz, they starts searching for Raz but did not get any clue or information about Raz. At the same time in the city crime rate went high lots of murder was happening in the town, so the police who was handeling the murder case investigates and finds that every bodys death was not in a simple way , it was a very super natural death , without any external marks on their body their heart gets burnt because of electric shock withput any external mark on the skin only heart and their lungs filled with some special protine and phosphorus and there were many fireflies lying around the dead bodies and that officer after a long time of investigaton founds that they all have completed there school course from the same school and are of same batch, due to all this connection he goes to the school for investigation and there the investigation officer collects the data of the students in that batch . after analysing the data and matching the data of people those who were dead, he founds that only three students of that batch were alive in his knowledge Raz , Maya and one more boy named Prateek who always used to disturb and hurt Raz . In this process he meets the investigation officer of Raz's missing case and there he knows that Raz is missing and they thinks that the killer might have killed Raz because he was also from the same batch after that he goes to Prateek and Maya,s house and brings both of them with him to the police headquarter for protection and explains the whole scene to them after knowing that killer would have killed Raz, Maya started crying , police make plans to catch the killer by feeding the lion with his favourite food - goat . they make plans to take Prateek in an open area with high security in a casual dress just that the killer might not make out the presence of the police. They went in the evening in the market and left Prateek moving here and there and looking the site from a position with well qualified and armed shooters after few hours of waiting when everybody disappears and Prateek remains alone there then the killer appears there wearing hoody and face covered under a long cap and fireflies all around him and his hand seems to creat electric current waves, then Prateek starts screaming and gives alert to the police, police tries to stop that killer but can't then officer orders to shoot but there was no effect of bullets on the killer while shooting his caps gets off his face and the face of the killer was revealed and there were glowing eyes with the face of Raz the officer and Maya understood that what was the matter and surprised at the same time, that from where a simple boy got all this supernatural power which was beyond of anyone's thought. When his caps got down he moved away without killing Prateek because the police force armed the arms towards Maya that if he kills Prateek they will kill Maya he was still having feelings of friendship and love for Maya.Then officer sets a team of few scientists and discusses the problem with them and finds a very unique solution and to execute that plan they use Maya. They somehow manages to give information to Raz that Maya wants to meet him . He agrees and comes to meet Maya and see that Maya was alone standing between a circle in the ground far from the city, he goes and meets Maya , she was scared then Raz says to him no need to be scared I will never hurt you, then she says sorry and asks how all this happened from where did he get all this super natural power , then Raz says that , if i am different its not my fault , i am simple its not my fault , when a person has nobody with him god is with him , when i was in coma one day a huge group of fireflies came to my room there they started injecting something in my body for hours they injected something and replaced my eyes with fireflies and then they took me out in the rain and the thunder injected a huge amount of electricity in my body without affecting a single hair of my body and then I started taking my revenge I have killed all of them only one and the worst is left Prateek I will kill him also and then I will feel relaxed and will go and visit my parents ,then Maya say that why do you need to do all this leave it and return to your parents they pray to god that he will cure you very soon and see what are you doing . As they both were talking the group of scientist completes the setup and the officer indicates Maya to get herself out of that circle as Maya gets out of the circle they creats a huge electric and magnetic field around the circle that even Raz could not escape and Maya inform all this to Raz's parents they comes to meet there son. Raz starts crying by seeing his parents and his parents too but officer says to her parents that he had killed a lot of people and if we release him he will kill parteek also ,we have to kill him. Somehow with very difficulty they are manage to kill Raz, when Raz dies his body converts into thousands of fireflies and fly away for ever .

If everybody is bad to you when you are weak it does not means that you will also be bad for them when you become strong, don't leave your original self be humble either you are weak or strong that is the best part of you and it will remain the best part of you.

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