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The 'Intro'vert

My 1st ever 'Intro' story on this platform describes the nature of an introvert's mind.

Feb 10, 2025  |   2 min read
The 'Intro'vert
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"It could've been better!"

"Yes" - another voice whispered.

"Then why wasn't it so?"

"It can be answered by only one!"

"Then, ask him about it!"

"About what?"

"About what had gone wrong?"

"He will say, 'Sorry sir, it won't happen again!' "

"Sorry won't change anything, right! He should be aware of what he is doing. That's for he is getting paid!"

"At least, you should ask him how it went wrong!"

"What for?"

"So that you can point out the lacuna in his prep and at least the others won't get affected!"

"Is it absolutely necessary now?"

"Why not?"

"There is a fair chance that we won't come here again to know that it got better!"

"What if we happen to come?"

"Then, we can assess the betterment at that time and will correct it at that time!"

"But if we didn't do it this time, a lot of people would get the same in the meantime!"

"Can it be changed by me alone!?"

"But you can be a starting point now!"

"What if it didn't change anything?"

"Then its not in your hands. Let's leave it to the universe!"

"You shouldn't back from this!"

"At least I had concern for others too!"

"Then, do it! Go for it! Call him and point out the same!"

"Yeah, let's do it!"

"Bro" - courageously

"Yes, sir! What can I do for you?"

"Bill, please!".

Those were the typical convos inside the head of an introvert after having a sip of a bad tea in a restaurant!

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Gabby C

Feb 28, 2025

Thank you for showcasing the non-fiction conversations within your introverted mind, sounds similar to conversations I have with myself.

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Martin Smith

Feb 27, 2025

I am not getting this one. If the goal here is honest critique of work:I would suggest striving for more cohesive concept. The thoughts here are thoughts we all have, not just introverts, the title and the story don't mesh. This is just thoughts inside your head, period. And there is no conclusion, no pint made about the inner dialogue.Ask yourself, what is it that these thoughts mean to you? What makes them significant? How do they make you unique. Explore that, that could be an engaging story.

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Aman Mishra

Feb 17, 2025

Awesome bro I really enjoyed it...

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Adnan Amjad

Feb 17, 2025

Nice very good

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