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The Man on a Mission

Daniel Carter is a man on a mission—one he refuses to fail. When his sister Emily vanishes without a trace, the world moves on, but he doesn’t. Every lead, every shadow, every whisper brings him closer to the truth. When an anonymous note finally gives him a location, he knows it could be a trap—but he doesn’t care. As he steps into the darkness of an abandoned warehouse, he faces enemies who have been waiting for him. But what they don’t know is that Daniel came prepared. Time is running out, and failure is not an option. A pulse-pounding thriller of determination, sacrifice, and one man’s relentless fight against the unknown.

Feb 4, 2025  |   2 min read
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Chapter 1

The Man on a Mission

The sun had barely begun its descent when Daniel Carter tightened his boots, zipped up his worn leather jacket, and stepped into the cold evening air. He had one goal, one mission - bring his sister home.

It had been six months since Emily vanished without a trace. The police had filed their reports, the investigations had slowed, and the world had moved on. But Daniel hadn't. He had scoured every alleyway, every abandoned building, and every lead the authorities had ignored. And tonight, he was closer than ever.

A crumpled note had arrived at his doorstep that morning. No name, no return address, just a single message: *The old warehouse, midnight. Come alone.* It could be a trap, but he didn't care. If there was even a chance Emily was there, he had to go.

The warehouse stood at the edge of the city, forgotten by time. Its rusted doors groaned as Daniel pushed them open, stepping into the dimly lit interior. Shadows danced along the walls, the scent of oil and dust thick in the air. He gripped the handle of the knife in his pocket, his heart pounding.

Then he heard it. A soft cry.

"Emily?" His voice echoed through the vast emptiness.

A figure stepped forward, shackled to a chair. Her blonde hair was tangled, her wrists bruised, but those green eyes - his sister's eyes - met his with a flicker of hope.

Before he could move, a voice rang out from the darkness.

"You finally made it."

Daniel spun around, knife ready. A tall man in a suit emerged from the shadows, flanked by two armed men. His smile was cold, calculated.

"We knew you'd come," the man continued. "You just had to make it easy for us."

Daniel clenched his jaw. They had used Emily as bait, but they had underestimated him. He had come prepared.

With a swift motion, he flicked a small device from his pocket. The lights flickered, and the warehouse plunged into darkness. A second later, smoke filled the air as a deafening alarm blared.

Chaos erupted. Daniel moved fast, dodging a gunshot as he rushed toward Emily. His knife sliced through the ropes, and she collapsed into his arms.

"We're getting out of here," he whispered.

Guided by the emergency exit he had scoped out earlier, he led her through the smoke, dodging the men scrambling in confusion. The night air hit them like a wave as they burst through the door, running for the car parked nearby.

Tires screeched as he floored the accelerator. The warehouse shrank in the rearview mirror, and for the first time in months, Daniel allowed himself to breathe.

Emily clutched his arm. "How did you find me?"

He glanced at her, his grip tightening on the wheel. "Because I never stopped looking."

And he never would.

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Yong Choi Chin

Mar 11, 2025

Good vocabulary.

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