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The Mystery In Darkness

The darkness pressed in, seeping into her skin, wrapping around her bones. She reached for the candle, for anything—but the darkness had weight, and it pulled her down.

Mar 7, 2025  |   4 min read

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Ebrima Korey
The Mystery In Darkness
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The town of Eldermere had always feared the darkness. For centuries, it was whispered that shadows held secrets too terrible to be revealed, that the night itself was alive and hungry. Generations passed down stories of those who had ventured into the blackened woods beyond the town's border and never returned. But no one could say for certain what lurked there only that the darkness was not empty.

At the heart of Eldermere stood an ancient house, older than any living memory. It loomed on the edge of the forest, its windows like hollow eyes staring into the abyss beyond. The townsfolk called it the Shade House. No one had lived in it for over a hundred years, not since the disappearance of the last owner, a reclusive scholar named Victor Halloway, who had been obsessed with the nature of darkness. They said he had vanished into his own shadow one night, leaving behind only a journal filled with cryptic warnings and diagrams that made no sense.

Then one evening, a stranger arrived in town a young woman named Evelyn Marlowe. She was a researcher of the occult, drawn to Eldermere by the legend of the Shade House and the unsolved mystery of Victor Halloway. Unlike the fearful townsfolk, she was eager to uncover the truth, to prove that the darkness was nothing more than superstition.

Evelyn took up residence in the abandoned house, brushing away cobwebs and dust to reveal long-forgotten artifacts. She spent hours poring over the remnants of Victor's work, deciphering his frantic notes. He had written about something he called "the Shadow Veil," a boundary between the known world and something far older, something that dwelled in the deepest reaches of the night.

The first few nights passed uneventfully, but as the week drew on, strange occurrences began. Objects in her study would shift ever so slightly when she turned away. Whispers tickled her ears when she sat alone in candlelight, the words just beyond comprehension. But it was the shadows that unsettled her most. They did not behave as they should. The corners of the house were darker than they had any right to be, absorbing light rather than reflecting it.

Determined, Evelyn pressed on. One night, she found herself staring into an old, silver-framed mirror in Victor's study. The candle beside her flickered, and for a moment, she saw a figure standing behind her a tall silhouette with eyes like distant stars. But when she turned, the room was empty.

Sleep became elusive. Each night, the house grew colder, the darkness thicker. Then, on the seventh night, Evelyn found the final piece of Victor's research an entry hidden beneath the floorboards, scrawled in a shaking hand: The darkness is not absence. It is presence. It watches. It learns. And when it calls your name, do not answer.

The moment she finished reading, the candle sputtered out. The room was plunged into total darkness, thicker than any she had ever known. It swallowed her breath, her thoughts. And then, she heard it a whisper, gentle and patient. It spoke her name.

Evelyn tried to move, but she could not. The darkness pressed in, seeping into her skin, wrapping around her bones. She reached for the candle, for anything but the darkness had weight, and it pulled her down. The last thing she saw was her own reflection in the mirror, reaching out to her, its expression twisted in silent horror.

When the townsfolk finally gathered the courage to check the Shade House, they found it as it had always been abandoned, untouched. There was no sign of Evelyn Marlowe. Only her journal remained, left open to its final entry: The darkness is not empty. It is waiting.

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