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The Opposite Door & Hallway

[Part 2] 3 dreams in one night, make sure to check out my first story before reading these two. Me and shadows dont get along .-.

Feb 21, 2024  |   4 min read
Jose Colin
Jose Colin
The Opposite Door & Hallway
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My eyes open, I sit up and turn my head to surprisingly see another door on the opposite side from where my regular door is in my room. I stand up and slowly walk towards the opposite door, I take a deep breath and open the opposite door only to find the outside of my house. Nothing unusal just a dark desert view with twinkling stars above. I walk outside to look around a little more but everything looked normal expect for the opposite door. I turn back around to go inside and instantly stop moving, standing in the doorway of the opposite door was a shadow figure. I begin to walk closer to see if my mind isnt playing tricks on me as I move closer the shadow isn't there anymore. Walking back inside my room dazed and confused I turn back around to close the door and as the door slowly closes, My eyes see the shadow standing outside looking at me where I was standing before. Before the door closes, the shadow starts to sprint towards to me. My heart begins to beat as I quickly lock the door and take a few steps back. The shadow figure begins to pound all over the door without stop. Breathing uncontrollably, I stumble on the floor and cover my ears to block the intense bangs coming from the opposite door. The loud heavy bangs continues, never stopping for what felt like an enternal endless hell.

 I finally wake up from that endless loop. Out of breath and confused on what those two dreams meant I quickly turn to see if The Opposite Door is still there but it was gone. Starting to calm down knowning that my dreams are finally over, my eyes catch the sunset peering through my window.
A huge sigh of relief comes over me knowing I dont have to go back to sleep. I stand up from my bed and walk towards the living room, as I walk closer I hear sounds of a sizzling skillet  to find my mother cooking breakfast I assume. I say "good morning" with no response back I think nothing of it while I go to sit down on the couch. I put my head down trying to remember all the details of my dreams when my house goes dead silence. The sizzling skillet stops, the sun coming up disapears, and when I lift my head my mother is no where to be found. The lights in my house start to dim, the hallway I walked through goes completely pitch black. My heart starts to race again as fear rushes throughout my body. My eyes are glued at the hallway, my body wont move, I can't seem to look away from the dark empty hallwally. When suddely loud heavy footsteps start coming from the hallway. I hear the footsteps coming closer and closer but I can't see anything. The louder the steps the closer this thing gets to me, with each step I can hear the sound of bones cracking like the creature was made out rusted old bones. I feel it getting closer but I still can't seem to move or look away. Sitting trembling in fear I feel it standing right in front of me, my eyes see nothing but I feel its heavy breath hitting from above my head. Before neither one of us moves a single inch my eyes open.

I finally wake up (foreal this time) from my third and final dream in a row. The sun starts to rise, I lay there staring at my
ceiling trying to understand what just happen but I cant, all I can do is take a deep breath and get ready to start the day. 

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