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the story of the lost boy

This is Part one of this short story, it's about this young boy that get's kidnapped by something. read the story to find out what kidnapped him.

Feb 21, 2024  |   6 min read

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A very long time ago, there was a boy who loved to play in the creek by the small old house, and then one day he went missing without a trace. People went looking for him. Nobody could seem to find him, until ten years later a young man heard everything about the little boy, and he got intrigued by the adventure of a new case. The young man’s name was detective carl, he was a tall man with blonde hair and brown eyes.

Detective carl went straight onto the job, he got his investigating team and a group of scientists to help him find the boy that went missing. Detective carl asked one of the scientists to study if the water had any special properties and they took a few samples. Then detective carl got the investigating team to look to see if there are any clues by the riverbank.

The scientists all came back with nothing special with the water that they took. After that news detective carl was a little disappointed but he was not going to give up. He went to go check up on the investigating team, but he couldn’t find them. Detective carl thought to himself they must not have found anything and moved to looking inside the forest.

Just then detective carl saw a flare and wondered if that was his team and if they needed any help, so he went to go see what shot that flare, instead of his team he found something much more disturbing.

Instead of finding his team he found piles on piles of burnt wood, but this wood looked different than any normal wood, this wood smelled weird. But then under one of the piles started to move and that supprised detective carl but then the thing under the piles started
to come out and it made the worst sound ever. The thing started to make a blood curling scream.

Then he wondered, is this the reason for the little boy’s disappearance, so he found a pile of rotting wood, although this wood smelled different, this wood smelled of human flesh. Detective started to dig through the pile of wood, and he found bones of some sort. Detective carl sent the bones in for investigation.

Now that the bones were sent in, detective carl wanted to know what would have done this and why they would put bones under a pile of wood. Detective carl was now all alone in the dark woods too far to go back, now all that he was thinking about was “I need to find shelter and quick” the sun was going down fast, and detective carl was running out of daylight. Then he remembered his training on how to build a good shelter.

Detective started working fast, with the little light he had he finished his shelter. The next thing that detective carl needed was a fire so he could be warm. He made a small fire just in time for the sun to be all the way down. Detective found lots of firewood to that could last for all week, although detective only needed it for one night. Then out of nowhere he heard a young child scream.

Detective carl knew he needed to do his job and protect people, so he went to go check it out but when he got there there was no trace of any living thing in sight. Then he walked for about five minutes until he came across and old wooden shack that looked like it hasn’t been used for decades, detective grasped his hand on his gun ready for what was
on the other side for him.

Detective kicked the door down and he found jars of liquid and inside those liquid filled jars he found human brains and hearts, he also noticed that there was a trapdoor on the floor, so he walked down the trapdoor. Inside the basement he found lots of machinery that doctors would use to study human corpses.

Then in the corner of his eye, detective saw something move and he tried to hide under behind one of the tables, but he was seen by whatever moved. He pulled out his gun and fired one shot. The creature did not seem to feel any pain, just then he felt a hand pull him into a dark room. Detective was in shock, there was a boy covered in stitches, detective asked the boy who are you. And then the boy responded with “I don’t know”.

Detective asked this boy if he remembered anything before he was brought to this place and the boy responded with “all I remember was I was playing near water and then this thing took me”. Then detective asked his second question but before the boy could respond, the creature had found them and they both ran out of there but as soon as they thought they were safe, the thing found them.

Then detective woke up on a cold surface and he looked down and he saw he had stitches all over his body. Then he saw the thing up close, it looked like something you’d see in a horror movie. But then the boy knocked the thing out with a wooden board. But they were not safe yet, they realized that there was more than one of these things.

The boy and detective defeating all of them went and then they went to the police station
to report their findings to the chief of police. Then in the next hour the two watched as the military went looking for this building.

The military couldn’t find this building, but they kept looking. The two looked at each other and realized what they were standing on. They were standing on a giant spaceship, alerting the military what they were standing on they decided to go and find a way into the ship.

Finally, after two long hours of searching they found a way in. inside the ship there was very detailed drawings of planets and the planets either had a check over them or an x over them, then they realized earth was the only planet with a check on it.

They then came to conclusion that the check mark meant there was some kind of living thing on the plane and the x mark meant there was no signs of life on that planet. Just then they heard noises coming closer to them, then the military pulled out their guns and shot at the creature.

Then detective carl noticed that it was the same creature that was testing on him. Then he told them to stop firing at them because their skin was absorbing the bullets, so then the guy said that they need to hit the back of the creature’s head to defeat them. So, the military agreed and did that and then just when they thought that they were winning then this big thing came out.

The big thing that came out looked like a huge octopus. The only difference between this creature was it had ten tentacle looking things, it also had eight eyes and tree rows of teeth. They decided to name this thing 0-479. They tried to kill 0-479 the same way they killed the others. Then
they stopped realizing that it was not working, then the military pulled out their guns and began shooting 0-479.

0-479 was not affected by the bullets. They tried to find a way to escape the ship, but they could not find a way. They tried to go out the way they came in, but that was not working. Then they came to a flight deck with smaller ships and then they climbed into them, and they soon learned the controls and then they opened the door and then flew out of the giant ship.

Then they found out the ships had guns on them, so they shot down the mothership with 0-479. They thought that they had won when suddenly, a small ship left the big mothership. The small ship went crashing down to the ground because of how heavy 0-479 was.

Back on the ground they saw that their town was abandoned, or so they thought.

The military and the detective and boy landed down on the ground and then they realized that the town was not abandoned, they were just all in hiding. Just then a huge shadowy figure slowly walked towards them, and they knew it was 0-479. But to their surprise it was something else, it looked like a human, they decided to name this human figure 0-580, he had four eyes, six arms, and eight legs.

The military started to shoot but then the creature started to speak English and said that he could help with 0-479. 0-480 claimed to know 0-479s weaknesses and weak points. The military asked 0-480 why they should trust him, then 0-480 took out his teeth and gave it to the military so that they would trust him.

They all then trusted 0-480 and they asked what his weakness was and 0-480 said that 0-479s weakness
was led. So, then they started to develop a led bullet and it worked, they killed 0-479 and they started to study the body and they concluded that there might be more of them coming. Just then there were two more giant ships that came.

Instead of looking like 0-479 it looked like 0-480. Then they noticed the 0-480s teeth were gone and so was 0-480. They looked all over but they could not find him. Soon they just gave up and went to sleep. Then all of a sudden, they heard a loud thud, and they went to go check it out. There they saw two 0-480s looking through all the military weapons. Just then the 0-480s heard them and went up to one of them that was moving and then ate him.

Will they ever make this out alive? Find out in part two coming soon!

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