It’s great that you love writing stories, but even in your reply, there are a few mistakes—like "crammer" instead of "grammar" (lol). Also, "got missed out" should be "I sometimes miss out on things." A little more careful proofreading will help a lot. But it’s awesome that you’re willing to improve—keep at it, and your writing will only get better! 😊

First of all, I’m not here to discourage you—I’m here to point out mistakes so you can improve. Trying is great, but learning from mistakes is even better. And hey, even in this reply, there are errors. "Atleast" should be "At least," "mentally tried to discourage" sounds awkward (just say "tried to discourage"), and "storue"—I assume you meant "stories."Since writing isn’t your goal, that’s totally fine! But now I’m curious—what is your goal?

Your grammatical errors-including a missing comma (“following, but”), incorrect possessive (“company product” → “company’s product”), spelling error (“hawing” → “hawking”), incorrect question structure (“why the celebrities endorse” → “why do celebrities endorse”), tense inconsistency (“was” → “is”), excessive punctuation (“Finally!!” → “Finally,”), and missing spaces after periods. It also oversimplifies endorsement motives, ignoring brand reputation, marketing strategy, and consumer awareness.

You should add real examples, like how Michael Jordan’s Nike deal changed sneaker culture or how scandals hurt brands. Mention data on endorsement success rates to make it stronger. Also, explain why people trust celebrities and how social media has changed endorsements. Fix grammar mistakes like ‘hawing’ (should be ‘hawking’) and ‘Why the celebrities endorse?’ (should be ‘Why do celebrities endorse?’) to improve clarity and impact.

your explanation is too simple and misses key factors like branding strategies, legal agreements, and consumer trust. Also, there are mistakes in grammar and facts. For example, it's ‘hawking,’ not ‘hawing,’ and your question should be ‘Why do celebrities endorse products?’ Plus, endorsements aren’t just risky and expensive—brands plan for that.

First of all, I’m not here to discourage you—I’m here to point out mistakes so you can improve. Trying is great, but learning from mistakes is even better. And hey, even in this reply, there are errors. "Atleast" should be "At least," "mentally tried to discourage" sounds awkward (just say "tried to discourage"), and "storue"—I assume you meant "stories."Since writing isn’t your goal, that’s totally fine! But now I’m curious—what is your goal?

Tense shifts, missing words, and weird phrasing everywhere. She needs to stop skipping articles and butchering prepositions. Half her sentences sound like they were thrown together without thought. She must fix these basics. Oh, and I’ve got way more to say, but I’m switching accounts to continue because there’s too much wrong here. Stay tuned. And trust me, this is just the beginning. Her grammar crimes run deep, and I’m not done exposing them yet.