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The Knife Between Us

A past life echo of love, betrayal, and fate.

Feb 18, 2025  |   4 min read

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The Knife Between Us
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The Weight of the Past

I jolted awake.

My hands shook, my heart slamming against my ribs. But the pain? It was already fading, dissolving into the heavy quiet of my bedroom.

I had seen it all. Lived it. And now, I knew.

Rohit. The love of my life in this lifetime? was my murderer in another.

I had felt the blade, felt the betrayal, but more than that - I had felt his hesitation.

Why had he done it? The question gnawed at the edges of my mind. Rage? Jealousy? A past I had yet to uncover.

And then I realized something else, something even more terrifying.

This wasn't the first time I had seen him do this.

There had been other glimpses - flickers of violence, of pain, of a road that always led to destruction. A road that, in this lifetime, I was trying to prevent him from taking.

I had loved him before. And now, in this life, I had fallen in love with him again.

But was I supposed to save him this time? Or was fate simply repeating itself?

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E Chance

Mar 26, 2025

This piece left me breathless. The writing is so vivid and cinematic—it pulled me in from the very first line. I felt like I was standing in that house, feeling every pulse of dread, every tremor of grief. You didn’t just write horror—you wrote haunting. The emotions linger long after the final line. Absolutely incredible work. Perhaps we can collaborate on a story, perhaps.

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Linda Weaver

Mar 3, 2025

There was sadness and anger because the innocence of the child was not spared....which made me believe it was a lover of the woman or an ex who was out for revenge because he hated the new life of the woman.

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Gabby C

Mar 4, 2025

Thank you, Linda, for reading and leaving a comment. The ending of the man that was the demise of the beautiful family is up to the readers interpretation. If you haven't read The Heart of the Pharoah, I encourage you to do so, all stories will be connected (not including The Last Night).

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E Chance

Mar 26, 2025

Interesting strategy for story building Gabby.

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